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Valkyrie Visual
You were
A vulgar
Full fledged
Fate
In the seat
Across the way
With your legs
Spread
Wide
Only to take
All
Of my emasculating
In the rectory hall
Of your mind
Since that’s where
I was
Giving it
To you
Like a runic
Inscription.
Slain.
Upon
Your heart
And you
Freed me
Into
The after
Life.
A vulgar
Full fledged
Fate
In the seat
Across the way
With your legs
Spread
Wide
Only to take
All
Of my emasculating
In the rectory hall
Of your mind
Since that’s where
I was
Giving it
To you
Like a runic
Inscription.
Slain.
Upon
Your heart
And you
Freed me
Into
The after
Life.
Published 15th Oct 2018
| Edited 1st Jan 2019
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15th Oct 2018 1:57am
Wow....that covers everything from the profane to the profound. Dramatic and utterly glorious!
15th Oct 2018 4:59am
Your comment had me lol-ing. I had trouble getting the artwork uploaded and saw you had already replied. You were quick. Thanks
15th Oct 2018 3:14am
You spun these metaphors into a poem as passionate as it is seductively on fire. Truly a wonder of poetic genius you have. The sexuality here mated with the rectory makes for religious undertones of sexual power.
John
John
15th Oct 2018 3:33am
