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Do what I say
Take off that black leather jacket
Slowly
Put it aside
As we watch each other across the table
Carefully
Unbutton your white shirt
Don’t hurry
Excite me
Revealing piece by piece
Of your beautiful body
Pull the ends out
Take off that sleeves
So i could see that
Manly arms
Remove the shirt completely
And let it fall
To you, half naked
I come closer to explore
You participate
With not moving at all
Completely
Giving yourself to me...
With the top of my fingers
I caress your warm skin
Starting from your neck
Over your collarbone
(I enjoy how you grin)
Across
The tightened muscles of your chest
Your nipple I pass
Scratching you gently
With my long nails
While you are breathing faster
I'll continue down
To your six pack abs -
Two
Four
Six
Across the navel
To the zip of your jeans...
But there I stop
Even if you crave to be touched
We’re both
Excited by the heat
From beneath
Therefore, now
Step by step, easily
You
Undress
Me
Slowly
Put it aside
As we watch each other across the table
Carefully
Unbutton your white shirt
Don’t hurry
Excite me
Revealing piece by piece
Of your beautiful body
Pull the ends out
Take off that sleeves
So i could see that
Manly arms
Remove the shirt completely
And let it fall
To you, half naked
I come closer to explore
You participate
With not moving at all
Completely
Giving yourself to me...
With the top of my fingers
I caress your warm skin
Starting from your neck
Over your collarbone
(I enjoy how you grin)
Across
The tightened muscles of your chest
Your nipple I pass
Scratching you gently
With my long nails
While you are breathing faster
I'll continue down
To your six pack abs -
Two
Four
Six
Across the navel
To the zip of your jeans...
But there I stop
Even if you crave to be touched
We’re both
Excited by the heat
From beneath
Therefore, now
Step by step, easily
You
Undress
Me
Author's Note
Just little imagination game
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Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 00:34am
Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 1:06am
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12th Oct 2018 11:57am
Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 2:20am
in my mind can feel your thoughts on your write
of lushes delight that comes out in this
what will be the outcome that stop
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I got from this sexy write
of lushes delight that comes out in this
what will be the outcome that stop
Ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh I got from this sexy write
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Re: Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 12:14pm
What an exciting comment.:D Thank you!
I'm glad you enjoyed it.:) That was my goal !
I'm glad you enjoyed it.:) That was my goal !
Re. Do what I say
The build-up was incredibly sexy. And the twist at the end made for great mad fun. I enjoyed this thoroughly. The seduction was thrilling. ;-)
John
John
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Re: Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 12:35pm
Thank you, John, for your kind words. Your review is so in-depth, I apprecciate very much. :)
Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 5:44am
Re: Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 12:03pm
Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 6:35am
Sexy imagination game here. Favourite lines:
We’re both
Excited by the heat
From beneath [the belt?]
We’re both
Excited by the heat
From beneath [the belt?]
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Re: Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 12:44pm
Yeah, that would be correct.:D
I wanted to make it little mysterios
Thank you for reading !!
I wanted to make it little mysterios
Thank you for reading !!
Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 10:53am
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12th Oct 2018 12:48pm
Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 4:04pm
Re: Re. Do what I say
12th Oct 2018 4:29pm
Thank you ♡ I'm glad you enjoyed it ;)
This scenario just appeared in my mind unexpectedly, I just had to write it. :)
This scenario just appeared in my mind unexpectedly, I just had to write it. :)
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