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You don’t know why I smile
You don’t know why I smile...
You can just see me
Looking at the distance
For a while
You don’t know why I smile...
Right on I’m creating
Three poems at once
Deep in my mind
You wouldn't understand that
Even if I say to you
Except, if accidentally
You’re a poet too?
In that case
This feeling of mine
You already knew
You can just see me
Looking at the distance
For a while
You don’t know why I smile...
Right on I’m creating
Three poems at once
Deep in my mind
You wouldn't understand that
Even if I say to you
Except, if accidentally
You’re a poet too?
In that case
This feeling of mine
You already knew
Published 10th Oct 2018
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10th Oct 2018 8:56pm
I love the structure of this one a great write my favourite part was the second stanza because that’s me lol 😊
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Anonymous
- Edited 4th Dec 2023 7:45pm
13th Oct 2018 9:54pm
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14th Oct 2018 00:52am
Thank you for your beautiful comment!! You just felt the right line, the thing that actually inspired me to write this poem! You described that feeling very well!
I was on a road trip, looking through the window, and then I suddenly came up with bunch of verses, and many ideas for the poems! That was that special feeling you are talking about. Very grateful for your review!!!
I was on a road trip, looking through the window, and then I suddenly came up with bunch of verses, and many ideas for the poems! That was that special feeling you are talking about. Very grateful for your review!!!
Anonymous
- Edited 4th Dec 2023 7:45pm
14th Oct 2018 10:29pm
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