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Taking
All it took
Was a glare
To get the rest of you
On the road map
Heading
Out of town
Without
Enough clothes
To cover me;
Since that’s
The only way
I could ‘ve
Taken
Your love:
Broken and whole.
Broken and whole.
Was a glare
To get the rest of you
On the road map
Heading
Out of town
Without
Enough clothes
To cover me;
Since that’s
The only way
I could ‘ve
Taken
Your love:
Broken and whole.
Broken and whole.
Published 10th Oct 2018
| Edited 11th Oct 2018
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10th Oct 2018 4:03pm
10th Oct 2018 4:10pm
Sometimes but it's usually verbosity or wordiness that repels me from the longer ones, if I'm going to be.
10th Oct 2018 9:17pm
11th Oct 2018 3:45am
Nari, this reads like a story with remarkable erotic power. Without getting graphic you create a sexual ambiance which is stunning.
John
John
