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They do try to call
He'd have me exude sexuality
That's effortless; as is all the romance
That drifts in gentle serial form to me,
On his instruction I join in the dance;
I'll follow you with fervour 'til your course
Becomes too disconnected; interest
Then fades to mere affection; if you force
Your potent prick upon me, then I'll test
Your measure with flirtations; as I blush
And put you at your ease, you may carouse,
Building your hopes until they feel robust;
But like a house of cards, their collapse shows
That love is evanescent and the sea
Is full of my belonging sexually.
That's effortless; as is all the romance
That drifts in gentle serial form to me,
On his instruction I join in the dance;
I'll follow you with fervour 'til your course
Becomes too disconnected; interest
Then fades to mere affection; if you force
Your potent prick upon me, then I'll test
Your measure with flirtations; as I blush
And put you at your ease, you may carouse,
Building your hopes until they feel robust;
But like a house of cards, their collapse shows
That love is evanescent and the sea
Is full of my belonging sexually.
Published 6th Oct 2018
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6th Oct 2018 8:31pm
We think that this piece says you like controlling without controlling, be in charge without being in charge. That's ok a woman has to has the feeling that I have control over my body and no mean no to whomever I choose to share with. But if the graphic is of you, we are willing to bet that they call. Again what we wrote is just based on our opinion of this piece could be totally wrong
9th Oct 2018 1:49pm
There are choices and choices and each choice leads to further choices or perhaps down an inexorable path to a place where there is potentially no choice at all. I like to have options to determine if the suitor is an idiot or not, but if advised I need to respond, then I may well do so, if this is couched in the right terms - it's complicated - smiles
6th Oct 2018 8:33pm
' love is evanescent' sums up so much....great line...another intriguing glimpse into your reality...very nice
9th Oct 2018 1:50pm
6th Oct 2018 11:25pm
Erotic as hell, and well written throughout, and I love the beauty of the last two lines. Nobody here has such inimitable style!
9th Oct 2018 1:51pm
Thank you - I am just hooked on the sonnet form - even if my iambic pentameters are sometimes a little too stressed.
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