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Patience
Reminds me of a rubber band ball
We all made them back in the day
A simpler time some might say
In between being a pre-teen and sniffing glue
First joint
First car
First make-out in the back seat
We all made them back in the day
A simpler time some might say
In between being a pre-teen and sniffing glue
First joint
First car
First make-out in the back seat
Author's Note
You gotta laugh at the crazy stuff of your youth, if you can remember them
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Re. Patience
5th Oct 2018 2:17pm
Indeed! Many instances of stupidity and anger that meant the world at the time, now only make me laugh and chuckle I made it out alive. Now to navigate in the land of adulting.
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5th Oct 2018 2:21pm
Re. Patience
5th Oct 2018 2:58pm
Brings back many memories...both good and not so good but smiling thinking about it so not all bad.
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5th Oct 2018 3:54pm
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5th Oct 2018 6:11pm
It does look a bit like a rubber band wall. Reminds me of when we were kids. We used to use lots of colors in scrambled patterns and then turn it over on another piece of paper and draw pictures on the back. It made rainbow art on the blank page. So much fun. This one made me grin. :-)
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Re. Patience
5th Oct 2018 10:42pm
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Re. Patience
10th Oct 2018 5:29pm
Patience is really like endless circles, kind of spiral :D
Like our youth, when we had all the time in the world for every mischief that came to our mind
Good link..intuitive art...very nice
Like our youth, when we had all the time in the world for every mischief that came to our mind
Good link..intuitive art...very nice
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