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In The Now
Directionally dillusional in a straight line scene
Not knowing where I'm going or where I've been
Heading out east on a westward breeze
Living on vitamins and two broken knees
Don't look off to the distance when I come out your way
There's desperation in the desire that won't go away
Enthralled in the beauty of a soft guiding light
This gleam in my eye only sparkles at night
Engulfed in the moonbeams I'm starting to see
What is exactly lying out in front of me
Journey's taken full of life's fury flight
Twisting of plans that are turning out right
Take heed of our future, but live in the now
With you as my starlight showing me how
Not knowing where I'm going or where I've been
Heading out east on a westward breeze
Living on vitamins and two broken knees
Don't look off to the distance when I come out your way
There's desperation in the desire that won't go away
Enthralled in the beauty of a soft guiding light
This gleam in my eye only sparkles at night
Engulfed in the moonbeams I'm starting to see
What is exactly lying out in front of me
Journey's taken full of life's fury flight
Twisting of plans that are turning out right
Take heed of our future, but live in the now
With you as my starlight showing me how
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Re. In The Now
2nd Oct 2018 2:39pm
Re. In The Now
2nd Oct 2018 4:04pm
Now which one is this to...the girlfriend or the wife?????
And if so then which one am I :(
And if so then which one am I :(
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2nd Oct 2018 4:09pm
Re. In The Now
2nd Oct 2018 4:17pm
Re. In The Now
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2018 6:28pm
And another beauty I'll be pondering for the rest of the day...very nice! :-)
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Re: Re. In The Now
2nd Oct 2018 6:47pm
Re. In The Now
2nd Oct 2018 8:09pm
Love the rhythm to this, and the rhyme. So smooth! I think of "carpe diem" when I read the title and final lines. Excellent work!
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2nd Oct 2018 8:18pm
Re. In The Now
3rd Oct 2018 3:05am
Living in the now is great advice, a very uplifting scene you've painted, it goes up and down but ends sweetly and hopefully..
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3rd Oct 2018 6:43am
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3rd Oct 2018 6:11am
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3rd Oct 2018 6:45am
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3rd Oct 2018 3:45pm
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3rd Oct 2018 3:56pm
Re. In The Now
3rd Oct 2018 9:23pm
Touching... you got me with some verses that are very deep, like this one:
"There's desperation in the desire that won't go away"
And...I like the encouraging end !!
"There's desperation in the desire that won't go away"
And...I like the encouraging end !!
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Re: Re. In The Now
3rd Oct 2018 9:39pm
Re. In The Now
3rd Oct 2018 10:32pm
Love the delightful rhymes..
Living in the moment..
I often tend to forget to remember the future , haha....
Nice, thoughtful moment of present..
Love
H
Living in the moment..
I often tend to forget to remember the future , haha....
Nice, thoughtful moment of present..
Love
H
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3rd Oct 2018 10:35pm