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Just one day
Let’s be friends
Before suffering eats me up alive
Let’s be lovers
Before we collapse
Let’s be honest-
However, dirty we’ll come out
The result – was our life good
We’ll know only at the end of the path
When it's too late to regret
Anyways, the deep will stay intact
Love me Just one day
So we have something
To memorize...
Before suffering eats me up alive
Let’s be lovers
Before we collapse
Let’s be honest-
However, dirty we’ll come out
The result – was our life good
We’ll know only at the end of the path
When it's too late to regret
Anyways, the deep will stay intact
Love me Just one day
So we have something
To memorize...
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Re. Just one day
27th Sep 2018 6:13pm
With honesty comes strength in a relationship...the right one will come along and you won't even have to try
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Re: Re. Just one day
27th Sep 2018 7:03pm
Yeah, the right one comes and stays without even trying. And the other ones just dissappear suddenly, so only memory and a poem remain. Yet, I wanted to celebrate a moment of meeting, because many people just come and go out of our lives...both friends & lovers. And we give them our love too. My conclusion: experience is worth the pain.
Re. Just one day
27th Sep 2018 6:39pm
Re. Just one day
27th Sep 2018 7:08pm
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27th Sep 2018 7:31pm
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Re: Re. Just one day
27th Sep 2018 8:31pm
Thank you for your comment! The transfer of the feelings was successful...and I'm so glad for it!
Re. Just one day
27th Sep 2018 7:58pm
Re. Just one day
27th Sep 2018 8:23pm
Re: Re. Just one day
27th Sep 2018 9:18pm
I bet he doesn't! I was just a game for him! And he was my sweet mistake! But life is full of wonders ....
Re: Re. Just one day
27th Sep 2018 9:30pm
It’s a damn shame when a man doesn’t appreciate a beautiful woman!
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Re: Re. Just one day
27th Sep 2018 10:03pm
Re. Just one day
28th Sep 2018 6:49pm
Honesty is something that is really important to me...love the way you are so open
about your feelings in this poem.
about your feelings in this poem.
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Re: Re. Just one day
28th Sep 2018 7:12pm
I'm so glad you like it, SaloKaviar. I can agree with you. Honesty brings the best out of me. And I feel released