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Crescendo
He takes my hand
without a word
Leads to a bathroom stall
Now I have his
pants unzippered
He’s huge, erect and tall.
I take the treat
between my lips
I suck him in, I flick
My tongue along
the shaft, slow sips
To gently tease his prick.
From base to tip
I use my skill
Moist mouth consumes until
The greedy need
Has had its fill
At length I feel the thrill.
The beast grows ever
harder while
I stroke his desire
Moving smoothly
with rocking style
I fan his inner fire.
With groaning sharp
intakes of breath
His arousal is expressed
I push on to
the precipice
Hot passion is my quest.
As rhythmic
motions bring release
The cum is lubricious
I drink the prize
with expertise
Warm, salty, delicious.
without a word
Leads to a bathroom stall
Now I have his
pants unzippered
He’s huge, erect and tall.
I take the treat
between my lips
I suck him in, I flick
My tongue along
the shaft, slow sips
To gently tease his prick.
From base to tip
I use my skill
Moist mouth consumes until
The greedy need
Has had its fill
At length I feel the thrill.
The beast grows ever
harder while
I stroke his desire
Moving smoothly
with rocking style
I fan his inner fire.
With groaning sharp
intakes of breath
His arousal is expressed
I push on to
the precipice
Hot passion is my quest.
As rhythmic
motions bring release
The cum is lubricious
I drink the prize
with expertise
Warm, salty, delicious.
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Re. Crescendo
23rd Sep 2018 10:21am
"The cum is lubricous" ... great great line ... original ... sweet sounding ... hot write my poetess ...
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Re. Crescendo
23rd Sep 2018 10:32am
Re: Re. Crescendo
23rd Sep 2018 10:48am
Thank you. Perhaps I need another stanza or 2 prior to the climax. I am open to suggestions ;-)
Re: Re. Crescendo
23rd Sep 2018 11:16am
I think most men would agree you can never over do oral sex, but I may have been too excited to finish reading if there was much more 😊.
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Re. Crescendo
23rd Sep 2018 10:19pm
which stall anyone would love to call for a quickie free fall
guys r guys
one and all
short big small or tall
all love it as you call
now your pre-cum -call
guys r guys
one and all
short big small or tall
all love it as you call
now your pre-cum -call
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Re. Crescendo
24th Sep 2018 00:42am
Great rhythm to this oral adventure. A perfect pace kept to the final stanza. Nicely detailed.
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Re: Re. Crescendo
24th Sep 2018 12:15pm
Haha thank you. This was actually my first foray into writing erotica. I may need more practice :)
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Re. Crescendo
24th Sep 2018 10:51pm
This is great erotica. Very nice piece you can tell look at all the guys commenting
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Re. Crescendo
25th Sep 2018 8:59am
Haha Thx I_IS_ME, As I’ve said, I’ve never written anything like this before. Strangely, I found writing the story quite therapeutic :)
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Re: Re. Crescendo
26th Sep 2018 12:41pm
Hi fellow traveller! Wonderful to discover this site and meet likeminded writers :)
Re. Crescendo
26th Sep 2018 9:45pm
I have to agree with lildragonfly in the best line in this piece; excellent rhyme scheme and straight to the point; you don’t fuck around with describing how you fuck around
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27th Sep 2018 6:04am
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Re: Re. Crescendo
7th Oct 2018 2:37am
Thank you T !! Your comment means a lot to me. I am a complete novice as far as this sort of writing goes :)