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TURN ME ON
It’s better to give than to receive
It’s better to please than to be pleased
So, baby doll get off your knees
And lay here before me
Spread your leaves and unfurl your blossom
As a flower welcoming the morning sun with wanton
The morning dew has painted you with dampness
That I tease with honey bee wings and butterfly kisses
With long hummingbird tongue I flick
Sweet nectar from you budding clit
Cum for me my beloved beauty
Cum for me in unbridled frenzy
There is no greater turn-on for me
Than to grant you unrestrained ecstasy
It’s better to please than to be pleased
So, baby doll get off your knees
And lay here before me
Spread your leaves and unfurl your blossom
As a flower welcoming the morning sun with wanton
The morning dew has painted you with dampness
That I tease with honey bee wings and butterfly kisses
With long hummingbird tongue I flick
Sweet nectar from you budding clit
Cum for me my beloved beauty
Cum for me in unbridled frenzy
There is no greater turn-on for me
Than to grant you unrestrained ecstasy
Published 21st Sep 2018
Author's Note
My entry for the 'Joy of Giving' competition.
Inspired by my limited, but joyful experience with women.
Inspired by my limited, but joyful experience with women.
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Anonymous
21st Sep 2018 2:04am
Well you got my vote!! Fav line: “With long hummingbird tongue I flick“ my oh my
Joy of giving sounds more like Joy of receiving.
Great piece!!
Joy of giving sounds more like Joy of receiving.
Great piece!!
21st Sep 2018 5:03pm
sometimes giving has a better enjoyment than receiving.... Giving paints plenty pictures in the mind of how you want to pleasure your partner. I love you choices of word descriptions and metaphors used.... Excellent write
20th Oct 2018 10:46pm
