DREAMS RUSH BY  (1-1-04, 5:30am, Galveston Island, Texas)

That was a real punchy stormy read - great!

This definitely fell like floodwaters in the mind as a tumbling of consciousness.  This is the kind of read that needs no punctuation or spaces for enhancement.

What it does need is an apostrophe in life('s).  

Thanks for sharing.  

Thanks so much for your wonderfully worded comment & constructive feedback Ahavati!  But as a matter of my own inner guidance, personal evolution as a poet, but equally due to one truly phenomenal Poet/Artist, dear Friend & stylistic Mentor, whose own completely punctuation-free (as well as all other traditional, linear 'RULES' of proper English grammar & literature in all his own prolific & consistently powerful & Epically long poems, had a profoundly liberating effect & makor influence on my own way of both wriging & wording my poems.  So it's mostly a personal preference for me now & because true Poetry should be (or can be, 'if' it & it's author should personally so choose) be transcendent of such archaically restrictive rules & by simply dropping a'ALL' punctuation, including using capitol (upper case) letters, the words of any poem, lose all restrictions, limits & unecessary confinement from such directional guidance (for it's reader) & therefore leaves the otchestration of it's naked, raw words alone, completely free & open for & to universal interpretation for any & every person who comes to read it, rather than controlling & guiding it in a much more constrictively & specific interpretively limited way, down that 'One Way Street!'