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I saw paper mache dinosaurs over studio walls.
spiraling spider webs
cocooned me
in glass shards.
gliding amidst capture
frozen by metal.
shock sets in
Death just whispered
sweet nothings
in my ear.
spiraling spider webs
cocooned me
in glass shards.
gliding amidst capture
frozen by metal.
shock sets in
Death just whispered
sweet nothings
in my ear.
Published 19th Sep 2018
Author's Note
i was rear ended in a car wreck on saturday sept 14th driving to work by a man who appeared to of had a stroke at the wheel. Randell Jarrell was reading a piece about the lost world from 1925.the title is the house numbers in between which the accident took place on ball rd.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Lost_World_(1925_film)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eIoyckh1R90
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Lost_World_(1925_film)
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eIoyckh1R90
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Anonymous
19th Sep 2018 7:44pm
It's the strangest of details that stick with us, isn't it? Staggers the mind at times
19th Sep 2018 8:11pm
Man. . .this is one of those poems that freeze your thought process: as a good movie, or book. Maybe even the lyrics to a song.
I would definitely lose 'that' and semi after in. A space would really enhance the impact of that ending.
And what an ending!
shock sets in;
Death just whispered
sweet nothings
in my ear.
I would definitely lose 'that' and semi after in. A space would really enhance the impact of that ending.
And what an ending!
shock sets in;
Death just whispered
sweet nothings
in my ear.
19th Sep 2018 8:25pm
Once again ... great poetry to seize us ... I so agree with Ahavati ... bravo samael ...
20th Sep 2018 00:49am
Times like these can really shake us up, as though halting time and perceiving only the tangible that is right in front of us. I’m glad the accident wasn’t anything worse!
