Hollow

sounds almost like a near death experience...emotionally charged verse...succinct...I love succinct...well done...

Thank you friend. I take that to heart.

It seems like you are paving the road to ultimate annihilation.

I believe I was at the time

It's a process of healing, Medinda.  That horrible walk through an empty cylinder of death row.  

But at least you're walking through.  

I think today I'm off.

I think everyone is having some personal interpretations of this which is great but it's not the same meaning to me.

We don't see the world as it is but as we are. We each have our own filter. That's the beauty of art, it resonates inside each reader, viewer, or listener.  

Personally I took this as a process of initial change to acceptance.  It could be anything from an emotion, a realization regarding a relationship, an addiction, a loss. . . so much could be associated with this verse.  

That's the very thing that makes it poetry, to me.

Thanks for understanding feel like im just having trouble getting myself across today. Lol

This reads like soft steps down a staircase to oblivion, with no need to elaborate. The falling is felt deeply

Yes, deep feelings indeed.