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Self-pity has become a loyal friend
You're entangled in a passionate affair
Pitching your wares to those you know
But your intimacy is laid bare
You dance the tango
Tightly woven intricate steps
A betrayal of what you emote
You're entangled in a passionate affair
Pitching your wares to those you know
But your intimacy is laid bare
You dance the tango
Tightly woven intricate steps
A betrayal of what you emote
Published 13th Sep 2018
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13th Sep 2018 11:16pm
Brilliant poem, Solesleftsoul! You've cleverly selected the words to portray your theme.
Well done, and welcome to DUP!
Well done, and welcome to DUP!
14th Sep 2018 3:14pm
17th Sep 2018 4:00am
this flows beautifully, i can sense the hurt in your words.
i hope you continue writing and hope that happiness will find you <3
i hope you continue writing and hope that happiness will find you <3
Anonymous
6th Oct 2018 2:00am
Very nice! Love that first line.
MZ.
MZ.
