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Come Softly To Me
For so many years
For such a long long time
I've dreamed to have you by my side
The one who can penetrate
My heart and my mind
I've finally found you!
I'm finally free!
To love, to think, to care
To just BE
And you inspire
You set me on fire
Burning in my thoughts
Filling my desire
Oh, what is this passionate
Love that we've found
Is it real, a dream
Or something deep underground
I don't even care
I don't really give a fuck
Real, not real
It's just my luck
You're a beautiful mind
Beautiful heart and a beautiful soul
And that's just the start
Your smile, oh my god, your smile
Something I haven't seen in awhile
You're my hero, you know you are
You're my going to bed
And my waking morning star
It doesn't matter
if there's a rhyme or a reason
Doesn't matter, if it's the right season
Of our lives
Doesn't matter if this poem
Crashes and dies
Nothing else matters
And that's the truth
As long as there's me
And as long as there's you
For such a long long time
I've dreamed to have you by my side
The one who can penetrate
My heart and my mind
I've finally found you!
I'm finally free!
To love, to think, to care
To just BE
And you inspire
You set me on fire
Burning in my thoughts
Filling my desire
Oh, what is this passionate
Love that we've found
Is it real, a dream
Or something deep underground
I don't even care
I don't really give a fuck
Real, not real
It's just my luck
You're a beautiful mind
Beautiful heart and a beautiful soul
And that's just the start
Your smile, oh my god, your smile
Something I haven't seen in awhile
You're my hero, you know you are
You're my going to bed
And my waking morning star
It doesn't matter
if there's a rhyme or a reason
Doesn't matter, if it's the right season
Of our lives
Doesn't matter if this poem
Crashes and dies
Nothing else matters
And that's the truth
As long as there's me
And as long as there's you
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Re. Come Softly To Me
10th Sep 2018 2:02am
So, this could be about a mystery inspiration? I've had a few myself & written in a similar way, I know this vibe.
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10th Sep 2018 2:03am
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10th Sep 2018 2:04am
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Anonymous
10th Sep 2018 3:00am
Beautiful, my friend.
Your mind is racing with passion and love!
You have a beautiful, and beautiful things come from it.
I'm awfully glad I met you here.
Great job Medinda.
Matthew.
Your mind is racing with passion and love!
You have a beautiful, and beautiful things come from it.
I'm awfully glad I met you here.
Great job Medinda.
Matthew.
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10th Sep 2018 3:16am
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Anonymous
10th Sep 2018 3:34am
That's supposed to say 'you have a beautiful mind'. Sorry.
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Re. Come Softly To Me
10th Sep 2018 3:37am
Good write! I love poems that rhyme its my favorite kind of work. Hope your doing awesome! See ya around
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10th Sep 2018 3:44am
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10th Sep 2018 3:53am
I appreciate that, in "real" life I only feel that about my kids. There is so much I could write and talk about on your poems but I dont want to seem invasive or over doing it. But I have read all you have posted and I really enjoy it even the sad and darker times. You keep me distracted and I like that lol
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Re. Come Softly To Me
10th Sep 2018 4:22am
Not only is your work continuing to improve and inspire, but this was so moving. And a coin flip from the last piece, I really follow the lines of hope and rising out of the ashes of despair into new beginnings. Inspires and inspiring!
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10th Sep 2018 4:31am
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10th Sep 2018 5:37pm
I love melodious pampering. And that specific description is wonderful to me. Thank you.