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My Heart
My heart echoes;
Singing in affinity
A rhapsody to yours
A hymn of respite
To keep you happy
Your hand to my heart
Its melody is yours
Singing in affinity
A rhapsody to yours
A hymn of respite
To keep you happy
Your hand to my heart
Its melody is yours
Published 9th Sep 2018
| Edited 14th Sep 2018
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9th Sep 2018 7:36pm
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Anonymous
9th Sep 2018 7:53pm
Welcome back my dear. Short and passionate but always an earthquake of emotions. Love! What a song! Without a synchronisation of instruments (The hearts), there is no melody. Very very beautiful. Don't leave us for too long. Without the best of you giving heat to our hearts, it becomes lonely. :) Hugs J.
13th Sep 2018 5:11am
Oh, thank you, my dear friend. It's nice to be missed. I miss myself; writing just hasn't came easy lately and I hate it. Sigh. My hugs to you, J!
Anonymous
9th Sep 2018 7:55pm
Absolutely romantic and beautiful! Missed your words so much!
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13th Sep 2018 5:13am
Better still have it there too;) Miss reading from you and your comments. Pandora needs a good muse and a comeback. Sigh..
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13th Sep 2018 11:23pm
Dear Poetess,
it was your photo likeness that drew me to you, but I can tell it's going to be the wonders of your poetry that keep me coming back.
This sketch of Free Verse is about as captivatingly beautiful to the heart and soul as it gets.
Imagery, emotional timbre, perfect picture choice for the ambience and moment, spot-on line-breaks, and whom, with an ounce of warm blood pumping their veins could resist the irresistibly warm, touching charm of:
"To keep you happy
Your hand to my heart
Its melody is yours" (omit the apostrophe in "its")
Sooo good!
Paint me swept and smitten! ⁓ Richard : )
it was your photo likeness that drew me to you, but I can tell it's going to be the wonders of your poetry that keep me coming back.
This sketch of Free Verse is about as captivatingly beautiful to the heart and soul as it gets.
Imagery, emotional timbre, perfect picture choice for the ambience and moment, spot-on line-breaks, and whom, with an ounce of warm blood pumping their veins could resist the irresistibly warm, touching charm of:
"To keep you happy
Your hand to my heart
Its melody is yours" (omit the apostrophe in "its")
Sooo good!
Paint me swept and smitten! ⁓ Richard : )
14th Sep 2018 3:35am
Wow! This really touched me deep and right when I needed it most. I have been struggling with words even in 20 word challenges. When Im this way, all the world seems dead. Thank you so much for this perfect piece of kindness!! I will fix that misspelling. Lol. I hate doing that, thanks for noting it!
You make poetry and sharing it a sweet pleasure.
With your lovely, creative skills, I know your words will soon be dancing happily and beautifully all over the page. : )
Drop by and see me … big hug! ⁓ Richard
With your lovely, creative skills, I know your words will soon be dancing happily and beautifully all over the page. : )
Drop by and see me … big hug! ⁓ Richard
