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What is this?
I’m crazy
But you are beautiful
I’m wired
But you are beautiful
I’m reserved
But you are beautiful
I’m selfish
But you are beautiful
I don’t love you
But you are beautiful
I hate you
But you are gorgeous
You are too much
You too, JUST LIKE ME.
But you are beautiful
I’m wired
But you are beautiful
I’m reserved
But you are beautiful
I’m selfish
But you are beautiful
I don’t love you
But you are beautiful
I hate you
But you are gorgeous
You are too much
You too, JUST LIKE ME.
Published 8th Sep 2018
Author's Note
Author Note: It's Nuts conversation.
First line, her voice. Second line, his voice.
Background concept picture copyright by respected person, source unknown.
First line, her voice. Second line, his voice.
Background concept picture copyright by respected person, source unknown.
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8th Sep 2018 11:08pm
10th Sep 2018 5:26pm
14th Sep 2018 8:30pm
I appreciate the author's note section, knowing it is a dialogue. Yin and yang, the dynamic between woman and man, or just between two people, as we each project ourselves onto everything we witness, it is truly an inescapable madness.
15th Sep 2018 6:44am
sometimes I feel replacing "He" in place of "I "makes convinient way of telling story. The writer knows who that he is, and reader too guess who that he is.
