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PRETTY GIRL
I saw a pretty girl yesterday
and I couldn't find the courage for anything to say
so in the end fantasy flew away
(she probably has a boyfriend anyway)
waiting and wishing for something real
is decidedly a dead-end deal
with her's and my own life lost in a whirl
death forever flew in a swirl
....passed up perfect pearl....
....my pretty girl....
.....
....
...
..
.
and I couldn't find the courage for anything to say
so in the end fantasy flew away
(she probably has a boyfriend anyway)
waiting and wishing for something real
is decidedly a dead-end deal
with her's and my own life lost in a whirl
death forever flew in a swirl
....passed up perfect pearl....
....my pretty girl....
.....
....
...
..
.
Published 8th Sep 2018
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8th Sep 2018 11:08am
I know what you mean ... that moment ... that comes ... and goes ... leaving you with nothing ... but a poem ... splendid write my poet ...
8th Sep 2018 12:39pm
9th Sep 2018 4:54am
Reduction Of Possibilities By Retraction Of Statement
Due To Uninspired Come On Is A Lesson In Lost Sex
Or Love's Wishability Become Reality ;
Go For It Next Time After You Practice Non Tongue Tiedability !
Due To Uninspired Come On Is A Lesson In Lost Sex
Or Love's Wishability Become Reality ;
Go For It Next Time After You Practice Non Tongue Tiedability !
9th Sep 2018 5:19am
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Feb 2019 11:45am
16th Sep 2018 12:10pm
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15th Oct 2018 8:37am
