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Bugs is my teeth
I知 riding on the road
and i think that our love is like the bugs in my teeth.
It痴 not dead as i can feel their little legs spazzing
I go home and floss them away
floss you away
tomorrow is another day, but much different from today.
I would have given anything for you
my kidneys, my femur bones
but you are like kidney stones
and they hurt...you hurt me...bad
Yesterday there was rain
i was-in a bad place, and stepped on a snail
minding it痴 own business
he or she died, squishy
Suspicion had overtaken me
then i read your text, while you took a shower
i was right, i knew you were actin fishy
So I知 going forget you were real
forget the feelings we feel
it's painful
but pain is a lesson worth studying
and I値l come back stronger
like a ride with a new engine
but this time i will wear my other helmet
the one with a visor
and no more bugs in my teeth
and i think that our love is like the bugs in my teeth.
It痴 not dead as i can feel their little legs spazzing
I go home and floss them away
floss you away
tomorrow is another day, but much different from today.
I would have given anything for you
my kidneys, my femur bones
but you are like kidney stones
and they hurt...you hurt me...bad
Yesterday there was rain
i was-in a bad place, and stepped on a snail
minding it痴 own business
he or she died, squishy
Suspicion had overtaken me
then i read your text, while you took a shower
i was right, i knew you were actin fishy
So I知 going forget you were real
forget the feelings we feel
it's painful
but pain is a lesson worth studying
and I値l come back stronger
like a ride with a new engine
but this time i will wear my other helmet
the one with a visor
and no more bugs in my teeth
Published 4th Sep 2018
Author's Note
I recently broke up with my girl. We had been dating for 3 years. I was just on ride, up the coast, thinking, and a bug went in my mouth. It got me thinking of this poem. I nearly choked. I had to pull over and wash my throat out.
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4th Sep 2018 4:11pm
This is honest and steady, great way to start. I値l be following to see more, you def have promise
4th Sep 2018 5:26pm
Thank you. That means alot.
I知 looking always to be better, and crossed fingers, develop my own style.
I知 looking always to be better, and crossed fingers, develop my own style.
