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Her speed of darkness
Bringing new life to an old growth forest
Shadows traveling to become sunbeams
Fractal time piece clocking inward orbit
Thought broker sells a forgotten dream,
As two shadows kissing behind the light
Umbra cracks the daydream midstream
A thrill running up a leg to our hindsight
Penumbra seams a seal of love supreme,
All the while antumbra hangs her moonbeam,
Night to be the earth shadow across our minds
Three states of twilight cross eighteen degrees of time...
Written by
runaway-mindtrain
Published 1st Sep 2018
| Edited 19th Mar 2019
Author's Note
Mark with serene impartiality
The strife of things, and yet be comforted,
Knowing that by the chain causality
All separate existences are wed ---Oscar Wilde
The strife of things, and yet be comforted,
Knowing that by the chain causality
All separate existences are wed ---Oscar Wilde
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Re. her speed of darkness
1st Sep 2018 11:51pm
In awe dearest Jeff this has such a melodic quality to it
I felt mesmerized by the telling
like this is prophecy...
love this Jeff 💕
love Crim
I felt mesmerized by the telling
like this is prophecy...
love this Jeff 💕
love Crim
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Re: Re. her speed of darkness
1st Sep 2018 11:56pm
your maternal instincts are ringing....this is a verse about mother earth spinning in sun and moon light...giving us all life...as the female does and was created to bring in creation...
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Re: Re. her speed of darkness
1st Sep 2018 11:58pm
Re. her speed of darkness
2nd Sep 2018 00:04am
Re: Re. her speed of darkness
2nd Sep 2018 00:12am
I hope to always be a tonic for your day...only real women feel my words...you spin in sync
love
Jeff
love
Jeff
Re. her speed of darkness
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2018 3:12pm
Just beautiful dear Jeff...as always!👌
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Re: Re. her speed of darkness
2nd Sep 2018 4:23pm
Re: Re. her speed of darkness
Anonymous
2nd Sep 2018 4:24pm
🤗🤗🤗🤗
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Re. her speed of darkness
5th Sep 2018 4:39pm
Wow the three states of twilight...the imagery is so beautiful. The mystery between day and night is fascinating....
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
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Re: Re. her speed of darkness
5th Sep 2018 7:00pm
Re. her speed of darkness
12th Sep 2018 00:01am
Another brilliant poem, Jeff! Such fantastic imagery. Thanks for your second entry!
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Re: Re. her speed of darkness
12th Sep 2018 4:59am
Re. her speed of darkness
What a deep perspective you show here
Your words are flawless however I am no quite smart enough to understand half of the words u chose... doesn’t matter I felt this poem because I understand the lore of the moons beauty and captivating powers
Well done Jeff
Zazzles ❤️
Your words are flawless however I am no quite smart enough to understand half of the words u chose... doesn’t matter I felt this poem because I understand the lore of the moons beauty and captivating powers
Well done Jeff
Zazzles ❤️
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Re: Re. her speed of darkness
actually, you understand much...it is our state of mind...not the knowledge stored...but the ability to let intuition flow seamlessly when needed...
thank you so much for the read
Jeff
thank you so much for the read
Jeff
Re: Re. her speed of darkness
15th Sep 2018 4:05am