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Unspoken
Unspoken words pour out...
People gasp, others shout
Why so many rules?
Why can't I think out loud?
Why can't I be myself?
I dont want to be like everyone else.
I want to think,
And understand.
No more rules.
No more commands.
I want a thought,
That's only mine.
Knowledge only I can define.
People gasp, others shout
Why so many rules?
Why can't I think out loud?
Why can't I be myself?
I dont want to be like everyone else.
I want to think,
And understand.
No more rules.
No more commands.
I want a thought,
That's only mine.
Knowledge only I can define.
Published 1st Sep 2018
| Edited 8th Sep 2018
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1st Sep 2018 1:48pm
This is an excellent poe, ASD, and I completely relate to it. Society and the education it provides teaches the poor children "what" to think instead of "how" to think. That's why you'll see many young people who take things at face value and often have no idea what to do with their lives.
Don't fall for that trap! Though, your poem suggests that you're resisting the indifference that plagues society.
Well done!
Don't fall for that trap! Though, your poem suggests that you're resisting the indifference that plagues society.
Well done!
21st Jul 2024 10:50pm
You're a fine writer with some wonderful insight on society & social issues.
22nd Jul 2024 8:44am
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