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london bridge ..
night, walking nervously
under the railway arches
hearing loud, angry voices
feeling glad it wasn't
yet light ..
Published 1st Sep 2018
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1st Sep 2018 2:49pm
1st Sep 2018 10:43pm
the loosening of nerves
is like tuning guitars -
someone mistakes it
for a song .. :)
is like tuning guitars -
someone mistakes it
for a song .. :)
1st Sep 2018 6:08pm
1st Sep 2018 10:45pm
wasn't that set up north, in newcastle or
somewhere ? I've never been there .. :)
somewhere ? I've never been there .. :)
2nd Sep 2018 10:48am
you're right - I forgot it was set in the North-East - but the 'city-feel' from your words triggered the memory ... :)
I recall why I live at the beach now...
it's a jungle out there..!
Always been into nighttime walks, though...
This piece is evocative, Dart... brings it all back... but gratefully, I haven't got to be in situ. thanks for the good read. Ely
it's a jungle out there..!
Always been into nighttime walks, though...
This piece is evocative, Dart... brings it all back... but gratefully, I haven't got to be in situ. thanks for the good read. Ely
1st Sep 2018 10:53pm
I still have a taste for it,
the trains running overhead
from tooley street to borough,
although, yeah, I also like
the beach ..
the trains running overhead
from tooley street to borough,
although, yeah, I also like
the beach ..
