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Watching
( a Rensaku = linked tanka )
a mother eagle
scans horizon flying west
to the canyon —
two eaglets in a nest
wait high atop a ridge
outstretched wings
ride a thermal updraft
silent, on the hunt
single-minded, piercing
through the fading sunlight
sweeping down
into the canyon’s maw
where daylight sleeps,
we’ve set up camp, a fire
& dine on humpback chub
the rafts secure,
each member of the group
can hear the rapids
upriver where we were
earlier in the day
I’ve brought along,
who licks clean from a pan
scraps of chub,
my pal, my terrier Max
who loves whitewater rafting
he looks at me
(is there anymore left!)
and snorts as I
pretend to toss him a
piece he thinks I’m hiding
a high-pitched cry,
commotion in the camp
as the eagle
strafes us with its pass & call
while everyone scatters
cacophony
echos against canyon walls,
the mother swoops
into the confusion
and banks around Max
swinging a stick
I try hard to distract
as she targets my dog,
one of the men aims a gun
I scream DON’T DO IT!!
I fall back into
a shower of sparks as I
watch, helpless —
the eagle sinks her talons
in Max and carries him off
a mother eagle
scans horizon flying west
to the canyon —
two eaglets in a nest
wait high atop a ridge
outstretched wings
ride a thermal updraft
silent, on the hunt
single-minded, piercing
through the fading sunlight
sweeping down
into the canyon’s maw
where daylight sleeps,
we’ve set up camp, a fire
& dine on humpback chub
the rafts secure,
each member of the group
can hear the rapids
upriver where we were
earlier in the day
I’ve brought along,
who licks clean from a pan
scraps of chub,
my pal, my terrier Max
who loves whitewater rafting
he looks at me
(is there anymore left!)
and snorts as I
pretend to toss him a
piece he thinks I’m hiding
a high-pitched cry,
commotion in the camp
as the eagle
strafes us with its pass & call
while everyone scatters
cacophony
echos against canyon walls,
the mother swoops
into the confusion
and banks around Max
swinging a stick
I try hard to distract
as she targets my dog,
one of the men aims a gun
I scream DON’T DO IT!!
I fall back into
a shower of sparks as I
watch, helpless —
the eagle sinks her talons
in Max and carries him off
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