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Ode to the Underground
Never a dull moment here, my dears...
Will it be perspective or perchance...
Persuasion... or perhaps... a push?
Quick, somebody call that woman with
the shovel... the bugger's fallen in...
Opportunity comes calling...
Published 29th Aug 2018
Author's Note
this piece was called forth by the flow of commentary on Takis' "Discord".
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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29th Aug 2018 1:38am
I fear that being underground has connotations
of the shovel or the tube,
either of which tends to leave one
a little squashed ..
of the shovel or the tube,
either of which tends to leave one
a little squashed ..
29th Aug 2018 3:38am
Hehehe... well now... I never considered the tube...
for me it's either the French Underground...
or it's that place where all the "others" go...
the disenfranchised... the homeless... the writers of poetry...
But I can't get the image of Angela and her shovel out of my head... cracks me up... every time ... ely
for me it's either the French Underground...
or it's that place where all the "others" go...
the disenfranchised... the homeless... the writers of poetry...
But I can't get the image of Angela and her shovel out of my head... cracks me up... every time ... ely
29th Aug 2018 4:37pm
29th Aug 2018 8:24pm
