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harmony
the day smiled and I smile back
the wildflowers were dancing in the fields
in perfect rhythm with the wind
the clouds made lazy pictures in the sky
I dream of the visions they see
watching the land of men
creating art in his likeness
in contrast, the sky wore shades of blue
to highlight the actors on its stage
sun-dappled leaves
sang of the hot summer days
the trees raise their branches
saying quiet halleluiahs
to no one in particular
the bees went about their business
pollinating tender buds of the season
nature took me in her arms and gave me peace
the day stretched lazily on
in no hurry to go anywhere
awake in the moment
fully aware of everything living
I can hear the drums of the ancients
deep in the bowels of the Earth
my heart keeps a steady beat
while the oceans rolled on
the tides in sync with the moon
my femininity guarded by her secrets
the very ground beneath us hums
in tune with the music
our Great Mother chants
all nature in perfect harmony
Written by
crimsin
(Unveiling)
Published 25th Aug 2018
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Re. harmony
25th Aug 2018 9:24pm
a transcendentally beautiful metamorphosis of consciousness Brenda...exquisitely beautiful vision
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25th Aug 2018 9:27pm
thank you dearest Lawrence I had to raise my consciousness to a different level to witness this wonder today I'm happy you found it pleasing 😊
love Brenda
love Brenda
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25th Aug 2018 9:58pm
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25th Aug 2018 9:59pm
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Anonymous
25th Aug 2018 10:00pm
Brenda.. harmony indeed.. this is so beautiful, laced with a positive vibe.. i love your lighter side.. into the list it goes.. love you my sister..
Dave
Dave
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25th Aug 2018 10:09pm
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26th Aug 2018 6:08am
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26th Aug 2018 8:47pm
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26th Aug 2018 10:28am
I like the contrast between your dark and light side...almost like a battle is being waged...
Your words paint a heavenly picture...
Dark Sun.
Your words paint a heavenly picture...
Dark Sun.
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Re: Re. harmony
26th Aug 2018 8:49pm
thank you graciously dearest Dark Sun you know it's funny you should say that a war was being waged in me when I wrote this one to see the light...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
love Crim
I deeply appreciate your thoughts 💕
love Crim
Re. harmony
26th Aug 2018 5:55pm
I love the sense of Nature combined with the power of the Great Mother. Just the poem to read on a Sunday morning.. This made my day!
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Re: Re. harmony
26th Aug 2018 8:50pm
aw thank you dearest Sir Crow happy to have made you day this morning 🌹
love Crim
love Crim
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26th Aug 2018 6:46pm
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26th Aug 2018 8:51pm
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26th Aug 2018 9:45pm
Wonderful symmetry and natural harmony here Brenda. I love the third to last stanza the most.
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26th Aug 2018 9:50pm
thank you graciously dearest Daniel so happy this resonated with you 😊
love Brenda
love Brenda
Re. harmony
27th Aug 2018 6:18pm
So very beautiful ) i love how you have given nature a musical feel .. The scenes you create are quite lovely . I especially love the mention of wild flowers dancing and the sky in shades of blue with actors on the stage
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27th Aug 2018 6:27pm
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29th Aug 2018 11:37pm
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Anonymous
2nd Sep 2018 5:41am
The clouds might of been to busy making balloon animals out of us humans.
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