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Smitten
it's been a while
since I have smiled
at something you have written
today within
your new writing
the pulse of someone smitten
I always knew
we weren't the two
lovers lost and finding
the only fire
was our desire
to touch each other rhyming
when you let go
it was a blow
still I can remember
the feelings felt
always I melt
when warmed by loving's ember
now you write
in love and light
visions of transcendence
a garden where
your soul you bare
my heart in full attendance
it's been a while
since I have smiled
now I feel your feeling
the love you share
and write with flair
is love I find appealing
since I have smiled
at something you have written
today within
your new writing
the pulse of someone smitten
I always knew
we weren't the two
lovers lost and finding
the only fire
was our desire
to touch each other rhyming
when you let go
it was a blow
still I can remember
the feelings felt
always I melt
when warmed by loving's ember
now you write
in love and light
visions of transcendence
a garden where
your soul you bare
my heart in full attendance
it's been a while
since I have smiled
now I feel your feeling
the love you share
and write with flair
is love I find appealing
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