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Steel
you stir my passions
with your hard expressions
the cold, calculated steel
of a higher intellect
a man of your caliber
commands respect
street cred, hardened and wise
you got it in all in spades
I would hate you if I could
you dare step to me
when no one else did
you're the man in so many ways
confident but tender
first to admit your wrong
if that be the case
no, I don't love you
I just see you hundred proof
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Re. Steel
25th Aug 2018 5:51pm
some ode
to
'The' man
the poet!
delivered
in ink glowing in admiration.
gem.
the man.
the ink.
the inker.
to
'The' man
the poet!
delivered
in ink glowing in admiration.
gem.
the man.
the ink.
the inker.
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Re: Re. Steel
25th Aug 2018 5:56pm
thank you dearest Cold One for the love on this write... I felt the words thought they needed saying...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love me
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love me
Re. Steel
Anonymous
25th Aug 2018 8:38pm
Raven.. i know the subject of which you speak. you layed out your feelings brilliantly.. much love..
Dave
Dave
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Re: Re. Steel
25th Aug 2018 9:41pm
Re. Steel
25th Aug 2018 9:44pm
Re: Re. Steel
25th Aug 2018 9:45pm
giggles yeah you could say that thank you for the read and comment it's appreciated ❤
love Raven
love Raven
Re. Steel
26th Aug 2018 6:10pm
I can't guess who this tribute is for, but doesn't matter. I enjoyed this thoroughly anyway. "Confident but tender" sounds like the ideal man. Superb!
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Re: Re. Steel
1st Sep 2018 2:58am
Re. Steel
Anonymous
1st Sep 2018 4:01pm
If he’s worthy of a tribute like this he must be special ;)
Beautiful
Beautiful
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Re: Re. Steel
1st Sep 2018 4:50pm
thank you beautiful Sophie he is a dear friend and all that i've said...
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love me
I deeply appreciate your thoughts...
love me
Re. Steel
12th Sep 2018 4:20pm
Re: Re. Steel
14th Sep 2018 3:54pm
thank you dearest Augustomni for feeling this write it was for someone special...
love Raven aka Crimsin
love Raven aka Crimsin