UPON AND INTO YOU  (8-23-18, 2:00pm, KOFFI on Tahquitz, Palm Springs, California)

Great piece, love the metaphors

Thanks for your wonderful response & positive feedback mysticseduction!  I don't even know where this one came from (other than my perpetually horny, subconscious mind perhaps?!!!?), because I was just sitting in one of my favorite coffee shop hangs, slowly sipping my third espresso drink of the morning that day, while silently people watching all the other comings & goings of other patrons everywhere around me, when all of a sudden, I heard in my head the first few lines arise, seemingly up out of nowhere & as I wrote them down on a piece of paper, the rest of the lines, just leaked right out, one after another, until in probably no more than a minute, the entire, brief, yet complete & cohesive poem (even with it's completely unexpected, central, metaphorically suggestive, sexual twist!???!) had suddenly seemed to have just written itself & appeared!???!  Very strange & mysteriously puzzling to me, but an equally cool & uniquely satisfying little 'pop-up-poem' gift from my subconscious muse just the same! (esp. considering how most of my poems tend to all be at least several hundred words longer!?!)