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My Secret Garden
I own a mountain garden
It is for me at a great bargain
I hire hundreds of florists
grow bunches of flora and it is
I visit the garden every weekend
even though the week never end
I say hello with shoppers
disguise as a normal buyer
I walk in the mountain garden
with shoes from Michael Jordan’s
fly my mind and stand high
no matter why the world going wild
Feeling peace as I’m here
cause I have you beside near
show you whatever I’ve done
that’s the only reason I live on
Glad I own a mountain garden
wear shoes from Michael Jordan’s
no matter what the world’s gonna spin
I feel myself as rich as a queen
And I enjoy patrolling with your company
It is for me at a great bargain
I hire hundreds of florists
grow bunches of flora and it is
I visit the garden every weekend
even though the week never end
I say hello with shoppers
disguise as a normal buyer
I walk in the mountain garden
with shoes from Michael Jordan’s
fly my mind and stand high
no matter why the world going wild
Feeling peace as I’m here
cause I have you beside near
show you whatever I’ve done
that’s the only reason I live on
Glad I own a mountain garden
wear shoes from Michael Jordan’s
no matter what the world’s gonna spin
I feel myself as rich as a queen
And I enjoy patrolling with your company
Author's Note
Love the weekends with you...
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Re. My Secret Garden
23rd Aug 2018 6:46am
"Glad I own a mountain garden
wear shoes from Michael Jordan’s
no matter what the world’s gonna spin
I feel myself as rich as a queen"
certainly are the queen....so very cool Jasmine...this garden feels like a hidden place for two ...but in plane sight for all...blooming for both
bravo my sweet
Jeff
wear shoes from Michael Jordan’s
no matter what the world’s gonna spin
I feel myself as rich as a queen"
certainly are the queen....so very cool Jasmine...this garden feels like a hidden place for two ...but in plane sight for all...blooming for both
bravo my sweet
Jeff
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Re: Re. My Secret Garden
23rd Aug 2018 4:03pm
Thank you dearest Jeff for the always support. Glad you thought it so very cool...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. My Secret Garden
23rd Aug 2018 7:17am
Re: Re. My Secret Garden
23rd Aug 2018 4:06pm
Visiting a garden is a really wonderful thing. Glad we love the same thing...
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Anonymous
- Edited 7th Sep 2022 7:45pm
23rd Aug 2018 12:30pm
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Re: Re. My Secret Garden
23rd Aug 2018 4:08pm
Glad having your nice feedback...it is such a magical place...thank you so much!
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
23rd Aug 2018 3:35pm
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Re: Re. My Secret Garden
23rd Aug 2018 4:13pm
Hey Bender, nice to have your visit. Glad you read my poem and commented on it.
And welcome to DUP.
love
Jasmine
And welcome to DUP.
love
Jasmine
Anonymous
- Edited 30th May 2019 3:51pm
23rd Aug 2018 4:14pm
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23rd Aug 2018 4:16pm
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Re. My Secret Garden
26th Aug 2018 9:24pm
This has such a lovely, natural and vulnerable flow. It was a breath of fresh air.
Daniel
Daniel
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Re: Re. My Secret Garden
27th Aug 2018 1:11am
Dear Daniel, thank you so much for the nice feedback. So glad having your read.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. My Secret Garden
6th Oct 2018 7:26pm
this is peaceful, serene, and downright pleasant. many happy vibes from reading this. well penned.
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Re: Re. My Secret Garden
7th Oct 2018 2:05am
So glad to read from you Samael. Always enjoy your visit my dear friend.
love
Jasmine
love
Jasmine
Re. My Secret Garden
18th Oct 2018 5:57am
hmmmm... wonder how many varieties of Jasmin flower in there :)
a happy write.! very nice.
a happy write.! very nice.
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