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so who was there when he opened up his mind
Five of six empty spun revolver
Paid out on one of a kind
Gambled as he rambled
Down minds haunted paths past
Revolver the solver
Exorcised demons
Silenced at last
Spun
hammer falls clicks empty
So spin again
Five of six empty
Just one to end the spin
The paper tells it greater
Weeping they read
Five of six empty spun
One of a kind now dead
J.Midian
Five of six empty spun revolver
Paid out on one of a kind
Gambled as he rambled
Down minds haunted paths past
Revolver the solver
Exorcised demons
Silenced at last
Spun
hammer falls clicks empty
So spin again
Five of six empty
Just one to end the spin
The paper tells it greater
Weeping they read
Five of six empty spun
One of a kind now dead
J.Midian
Published 22nd Aug 2018
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Anonymous
22nd Aug 2018 1:35pm
It sounds a lot like Russian roulette. A game of everyday life. It's bound to go horribly wrong. Deep thoughts here. Good ink. J.
24th Aug 2018 9:15pm
22nd Aug 2018 7:23pm
It sounds like you know because you've been there. I really like this, how it's written and the harsh truthiness. Great!
24th Aug 2018 9:21pm
22nd Aug 2018 11:07pm
24th Aug 2018 9:14pm
24th Aug 2018 9:33pm
A truly well written tragic piece about another soul lost to the enemy, prayers of strength to all who would think about carrying out such a desperate act.
25th Aug 2018 8:20am
