on EDITING...

you have good self control dearest Ely
I'm constantly reevaluating
but I think a thought is best as it's inspired
in any given moment...

wonderful thought process...

love Crim

This is what happens after I have worried poor thing  to death and it is threatening to expire altogether...

well you give me wry smiles :) you're very clever...

love Crim

dear Sister Ely...
no poet here...but agree absolutely with ya ink here.



ps:- the only reason this cold scribbler scribbles:
inking the expression in its purity
and for no other purpose

so far kept me happy. ;-)

... and that is the most important thing... Ely

Don't wait to long or the feeling will be gone

Many of my short pieces come one word at a time while commenting on a poem... seems reading the stuff opens a valve in my head... the impulse may not pass through my brain on its way to the paper, either... Ely

Multi-layered statement.... I love your short and sweets amiga!

Multi-layered, indeed... it's funny how that happens... like there is a sprite ..inside my head... who, rarely leads me, "down the garden path"
as my sainted Mother said.
Instead, I get prompts and hunches and hints... and once in a while a kick in the arse... when I'm just too dense to get it. hugs, Ely

nxah  so wish you knew how to read sotho right now
but it would have went something like this in English
a doubtful is a bird that never soars to touch the sky  

Oh... I wish I could too...  
sounds absolutely fascinating!  
I love playing around with semantics...  
but adding another, culturally disparate (I expect) language into the mix ... that's an adventure...  
"Fascinating!", as Mr Spock said.. Ely.