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Rain Kissed Innocence
What happens then? Oh! Why can't you explain?
You kissed me on the mouth - did you feel joy?
What did you taste? Did butterflies deploy
Themselves? Did ideas flutter, then ingrain?
Was every touch, temptation: a refrain
Of falling raindrops? Did you feel as coy,
As I did? So untried - would you destroy
My innocence? And, then, try to reclaim
The upper hand? Empowered: lead me where,
(You instruct me) you never can resist
Intimate intercourse? Unsubtle pain
Is all you offer me; but do I dare
Accept your cock in my cunt, once we've kissed:
Don't rain on my parade, please just explain.
You kissed me on the mouth - did you feel joy?
What did you taste? Did butterflies deploy
Themselves? Did ideas flutter, then ingrain?
Was every touch, temptation: a refrain
Of falling raindrops? Did you feel as coy,
As I did? So untried - would you destroy
My innocence? And, then, try to reclaim
The upper hand? Empowered: lead me where,
(You instruct me) you never can resist
Intimate intercourse? Unsubtle pain
Is all you offer me; but do I dare
Accept your cock in my cunt, once we've kissed:
Don't rain on my parade, please just explain.
Published 14th Aug 2018
| Edited 16th Aug 2018
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I like how you pose a series of questions then come to your own conclusions. His own lack of clarity, verbally or emotionally, is a deal breaker. Fine work, SweetOblivion!
16th Aug 2018 10:52am
16th Aug 2018 11:29pm
My apologies, SweetOblivion. I referred to you as Bonzi in my last comment. I will correct this if I can.
