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Words
I have given and I have received
Sometimes my words are misperceived
Inquisitive but not the inquisition
I try to clarify my position
We all at times can fail in expression
and suddenly arouse the other's aggression
Guilty of stepping on people's toes
in the process I made some friends and foes
I am aware now more than ever
using words with great care keeps fair the weather
yet there needs to be the freedom to express
our thoughts and feelings without distress
I guess we all just try to navigate
and I hope we can communicate
without trying to
infuriate
obliterate
eradicate
Sometimes my words are misperceived
Inquisitive but not the inquisition
I try to clarify my position
We all at times can fail in expression
and suddenly arouse the other's aggression
Guilty of stepping on people's toes
in the process I made some friends and foes
I am aware now more than ever
using words with great care keeps fair the weather
yet there needs to be the freedom to express
our thoughts and feelings without distress
I guess we all just try to navigate
and I hope we can communicate
without trying to
infuriate
obliterate
eradicate
Author's Note
Between politically correct and flying off the handle, there must be a respectful way to authentically communicate....
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Re. Words
13th Aug 2018 1:40am
Well Penned , and Posted , Angelast ;
May it be another great reminder to all of us ;
We all are fallible ;
Yet what beautiful souls in this journey of phoenix
born and reborn , eternally !
And if our words fall short of the momentary expression ,
We can only hope , however they were heard , they made
an impression , which shall bear good fruit and in the end
bring progression , not repression !
May it be another great reminder to all of us ;
We all are fallible ;
Yet what beautiful souls in this journey of phoenix
born and reborn , eternally !
And if our words fall short of the momentary expression ,
We can only hope , however they were heard , they made
an impression , which shall bear good fruit and in the end
bring progression , not repression !
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13th Aug 2018 1:44am
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13th Aug 2018 11:35am
Hey Ang
This poem brought a memory of a verse my father used to recite often... I never really subscribed to it. I always felt that the verse was copt out of responsibility... It was...
"Sticks and stones will break my bones but words won't ever harm me."
Enjoyed your thought provoking piece.
Blue Skies at you
Al
This poem brought a memory of a verse my father used to recite often... I never really subscribed to it. I always felt that the verse was copt out of responsibility... It was...
"Sticks and stones will break my bones but words won't ever harm me."
Enjoyed your thought provoking piece.
Blue Skies at you
Al
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That's not what I say in here...words can make you sick to your stomach. I know....
The poems is more about how things go wrong in that department and how I have been on both sides of the equation. Anyhow...thanks for stopping by Al!
The poems is more about how things go wrong in that department and how I have been on both sides of the equation. Anyhow...thanks for stopping by Al!
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14th Aug 2018 00:08am
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14th Aug 2018 1:03am
Yes....there is intention and then there is perception. And sometimes there is confusion....
Thanks for reading and for your gracious compliment.
Thanks for reading and for your gracious compliment.
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15th Aug 2018 3:28pm
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16th Aug 2018 1:58am
I try to follow the wonderful teaching of the Chinese Zen master, Linji...become a person of no rank...your wonderful poem rminded me of this "no rank"...beautiful indeed Angel.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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16th Aug 2018 2:11am
Thank you so much Harry. I try to be honest with myself. Don't care for ranks or beeing admired. I care to grow as a human beeing.
Always appreciate you stopping by
A.
Always appreciate you stopping by
A.
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16th Aug 2018 5:21pm
WOW! I found this t be very moving, obviously written with passion. The breakdown of communication in any circumstance is truly destructive, good line of communication can solve so much :-))))
such a good write :-)))))
such a good write :-)))))
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16th Aug 2018 7:34pm
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2018 8:28pm
Very nice, Angel! And so true. Before I was on this site(which is great to make friends in), I was on this chat thing, and it was brutal. If you chatted with someone, they would misconstrue your words(if you were joking, or just the way they perceived what you wrote), and this poem reminded me of that.
Excellent poetry. Can't wait to read more.
Matthew.
Excellent poetry. Can't wait to read more.
Matthew.
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31st Aug 2018 10:03pm
Yes, this happens quickly. It can become really fierce. Of course online we don't have eye contact and no tone of voice we can read. Things can go wrong.
Thanks for stopping by
A.
Thanks for stopping by
A.
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Anonymous
31st Aug 2018 10:16pm
So true, Angel.
Thanks for the great poetry.
I love this site! You get to read great poetry, and discuss it with intelligent people such as yourself.
Hope to talk to you soon.
Have a great, long weekend.
Matthew.
Thanks for the great poetry.
I love this site! You get to read great poetry, and discuss it with intelligent people such as yourself.
Hope to talk to you soon.
Have a great, long weekend.
Matthew.
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