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hush
you feel my anger as it pours off me in waves
it makes you shake your head
you know I'm being bull headed
you're an arrogant man
I'm an arrogant woman
we lust each other but we clash too
you see me a certain way
I see you in another
I shock you with what I say
you do the same to me in all honesty
I know you want to throw me down and fuck me
for being so hard and stubborn
you want me in the pleasure zone
but I feel the sting
and weight of your hand
I cried but then I got mad
see that's how I deal with emotion
anything painful turns into anger
I want to mellow today
simmer on down
and really absorb what you've said
instead of drawing conclusions
from what you didn't
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Re. hush
8th Aug 2018 8:46pm
Listening, and really taking in every detail is quite a trick, and few are up to it. I know I'm not. At least you know not to draw conclusions. Fine work, Lady Crim.
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Re: Re. hush
8th Aug 2018 8:54pm
thank you dearest Sir Crow I have a tendency to zero in on the painful things being said instead of the positive... then I take things to heart and it's all bad... I need to relax sit back and take in the big picture.. damn feelings just seem to flood me even when I know how to respond wiser...
I appreciate your comment :)
love Crim
I appreciate your comment :)
love Crim
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8th Aug 2018 9:25pm
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Re: Re. hush
8th Aug 2018 9:28pm
thank you dearest Hans yes focus on the positive instead of letting hurt flare up from the harder aspects of a conversation...
I deeply appreciate your insight...
love Brenda
I deeply appreciate your insight...
love Brenda
Re: Re. hush
8th Aug 2018 9:39pm
it does dearest Tim and sometimes it burns...
thank you for your thoughts...
love Brenda
thank you for your thoughts...
love Brenda
Re. hush
its hard to control emotions because you don't know where it leads to.
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Re: Re. hush
8th Aug 2018 10:18pm
thank you dearest Shakesperan for reading and feeling this write but if you're referring to me i'm no Queen... I think you write with heart and I try and make sure to always say so when you post...
love Crim
love Crim
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Re: Re. hush
8th Aug 2018 10:27pm
I understand dearest Shakesperan hugs dear one... if you feel you can write about do...if you want to talk pm me...
love Crim
love Crim
Re: Re. hush
8th Aug 2018 10:28pm
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Re: Re. hush
9th Aug 2018 00:09am
thank you dearest Bender yeah I tend to get angry too when i'm hurt then I don't think clearly... now I try to dial things down when I get flooded with emotion and figure out what i'm really feeling...
I deeply appreciate you sharing your own thoughts with me...
love Crim
I deeply appreciate you sharing your own thoughts with me...
love Crim
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9th Aug 2018 00:12am
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Re. hush
9th Aug 2018 1:00pm
Being unable to express our feelings properly to our lover or their unwillingness to listen to how we present it usually ends up in a fight! We get defensive and attack instead of trying to understand. It’s very frustrating but usually a misunderstanding.
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Re: Re. hush
9th Aug 2018 1:05pm
thank you dearest Lyrical One for the deep insight here you're right more often than not it's a misunderstanding...
I appreciate your thoughts...
love Crim
I appreciate your thoughts...
love Crim
Re. hush
9th Aug 2018 5:30pm
I can feel your emotions on this one...you come across a strong woman...maybe you should give him the silent treatment?
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Re: Re. hush
9th Aug 2018 5:34pm
you gave me a wry laugh with that one dearest Dark Sun :)
while I am a strong woman...i'm afraid the silent treatment would be more torture for me then him... I tried that before i'm no good at it...
thank you for your insights and great comment...
love Crim
while I am a strong woman...i'm afraid the silent treatment would be more torture for me then him... I tried that before i'm no good at it...
thank you for your insights and great comment...
love Crim