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Beauty becomes her
Shades of beauty whisper
in the most wretched of places.
I see it in the streetlights casting rainbows
upon corrupt, back alley puddles.
Love is born there, in the dark.
It is the passion seen
in the eyes of a broken woman
as she turns them on you
like a loaded gun.
She is concrete wildflowers,
desperately reaching for an illicit sun.
And like a somber tear
that never left her palid cheek,
one day she will be beautiful.
in the most wretched of places.
I see it in the streetlights casting rainbows
upon corrupt, back alley puddles.
Love is born there, in the dark.
It is the passion seen
in the eyes of a broken woman
as she turns them on you
like a loaded gun.
She is concrete wildflowers,
desperately reaching for an illicit sun.
And like a somber tear
that never left her palid cheek,
one day she will be beautiful.
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Re. Beauty becomes her
3rd Aug 2018 1:39am
I would add this to my reading list if it were not full. well penned. keep'em coming.
"She is concrete wildflowers,
desperately reaching for an illicit sun. " - love it.
"She is concrete wildflowers,
desperately reaching for an illicit sun. " - love it.
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Re: Re. Beauty becomes her
12th Aug 2018 6:58pm
Thank you Samael, so kind of you.
That line was one of my favorites, too
and I'm glad you came to visit and comment...
That line was one of my favorites, too
and I'm glad you came to visit and comment...
Re. Beauty becomes her
3rd Aug 2018 2:33am
Re: Re. Beauty becomes her
12th Aug 2018 7:00pm
Yes there is, Tim, and I think we get so caught up
in ourselves that we sometimes forget to enjoy
the little things hiding in plain sight. Thanks for reading...
in ourselves that we sometimes forget to enjoy
the little things hiding in plain sight. Thanks for reading...
Re. Beauty becomes her
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2018 12:10pm
Something beyond compare is the beauty of those who are broken. It becomes innocence, it becomes uncomparable with anything else. It becomes unique and precious. Truly beautiful ink. J.
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Re: Re. Beauty becomes her
12th Aug 2018 7:05pm
Unique and precious for sure; it makes us who we are,
all of us, and acceptance makes it that much more
beautiful.
Thank you for the amazing comment,
I truly appreciate it...
all of us, and acceptance makes it that much more
beautiful.
Thank you for the amazing comment,
I truly appreciate it...
Re. Beauty becomes her
3rd Aug 2018 1:28pm
Re: Re. Beauty becomes her
12th Aug 2018 7:07pm
So very sweet of you, it's nice to see you on my pages
and I thank you for your kind words...
and I thank you for your kind words...
Re. Beauty becomes her
Anonymous
3rd Aug 2018 1:34pm
So often your poetry leaves me a little bit speechless in its beauty, Kasai. This one is no exception. That last line is going to live in me for a long time to come. Beautiful
...Willow
...Willow
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Re: Re. Beauty becomes her
12th Aug 2018 7:10pm
Sweet Willow, with your beautiful words, so glad this
moved you enough to stay with you for awhile.
Thank you so much for your lovely visits, they always leave me smiling....
moved you enough to stay with you for awhile.
Thank you so much for your lovely visits, they always leave me smiling....
Re. Beauty becomes her
3rd Aug 2018 2:26pm
Re: Re. Beauty becomes her
12th Aug 2018 7:14pm
Thank you for coming to see me, wise one,
even when my responses are few and far between.
Sometimes it's difficult to take time for the things we enjoy
and I truly appreciate you taking a few minutes of yours to come visit me....
even when my responses are few and far between.
Sometimes it's difficult to take time for the things we enjoy
and I truly appreciate you taking a few minutes of yours to come visit me....
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Re: Re. Beauty becomes her
28th Nov 2018 11:42pm
Thanks so much for coming to take a look, Timagination, I really appreciate the comment...
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Re. Beauty becomes her
16th Dec 2019 5:46am
Re. Beauty becomes her
31st Oct 2020 7:21am
Exquisite! Raw, sharp, cold, blocky, crooked. It warped me back to the streets of L.A.
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Re. Beauty becomes her
25th Jan 2021 5:42pm
Survival is beautiful
Power, perseverance, and pride create a definite air of sexiness and attractiveness
This piece is phenomenal
Power, perseverance, and pride create a definite air of sexiness and attractiveness
This piece is phenomenal
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Re. Beauty becomes her
3rd Feb 2022 2:01am
This is beautiful! I felt haunted for several minutes by the broken woman's eyes turning toward me.
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