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- Edited 8th Nov 2018 00:49am
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2nd Aug 2018 5:05am
I really enjoy this poem. However, I feel as though I'm missing the ending. I'm not saying it has to be 25 lines longer, but maybe just one. What are her innocent, naive eyes gazing at?
5th Aug 2018 11:24pm
Thank you so much michaelaschull for the read and thoughtful comments .. i will take your thoughts into consideration ... to further elaborate ... x
Anonymous
- Edited 27th Dec 2019 12:45pm
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5th Aug 2018 11:27pm
Thank you so much Melia for the lovely comments ... much appreciated
Greets, JeJe
Greets, JeJe
