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The Ocean
The ocean
She exists in mystery
Her depths are unknown
And beauty untouched
Her waters reflect her love
So pure, so beautiful, so very delicate
Yet so very powerful
She may care about you from every depth of her soul
But there are nights where she knows no mercy
Because those are the nights
she confides her bottled emotions
To the only one she trusts
To the only one able to calm her fierce waves
To her loyal friend and largest crush
The breathtaking moon.
She exists in mystery
Her depths are unknown
And beauty untouched
Her waters reflect her love
So pure, so beautiful, so very delicate
Yet so very powerful
She may care about you from every depth of her soul
But there are nights where she knows no mercy
Because those are the nights
she confides her bottled emotions
To the only one she trusts
To the only one able to calm her fierce waves
To her loyal friend and largest crush
The breathtaking moon.
Written by
Hidden_Emotions
(Sphinxlike)
Published 1st Aug 2018
| Edited 2nd Aug 2018
Author's Note
This poem is my very first attempt to express myself and tell you a little about me. The one thing in this world I can relate to is the ocean...
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Re. The Ocean
1st Aug 2018 7:17pm
I’m sure the ocean in it’s beauty is the reflection of your inner you.
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2nd Aug 2018 7:15am
Re. The Ocean
2nd Aug 2018 2:02am
You're off to a good start, Mz Hidden... keep up the good work... Write On, Poet... Ely
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2nd Aug 2018 7:14am
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2nd Aug 2018 3:11am
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2nd Aug 2018 7:15am
Re. The Ocean
2nd Aug 2018 4:48pm
Another wonderful poem! Your username is perfect for describing the oceans. Underneath the gentle waves is a powerful force that controls them since ancient times. Well done!
If you're interested, I encourage you to read my poem that I collaborated with SeaEntity:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/312853-milk-water-a-toast-co-written-with/
If you're interested, I encourage you to read my poem that I collaborated with SeaEntity:
https://deepundergroundpoetry.com/poems/312853-milk-water-a-toast-co-written-with/
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2nd Aug 2018 4:50pm
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2nd Aug 2018 4:56pm
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2nd Aug 2018 4:58pm
Re. The Ocean
14th Nov 2018 6:46pm
" She may care about you from every depth of her soul
But there are nights where she knows no mercy " <<-----strong lines
But there are nights where she knows no mercy " <<-----strong lines
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15th Nov 2018 3:54pm
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