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and when i see flowers
i think of you
for they do the same
what you do
for both you
and they
know not except
to bring
colors
joy
fragrance
to the
heart
mind
and soul
and when i see flowers
i stop
the pause is felt
for an eternity
between the breaths
something happens
like a slow motion scene
the world stops in its tracks
except
for my lips to make their upward movement
at the edges
and then it's back
to normal
speed
the only change
the lasting grin
when i see flowers....
Published 21st Jul 2018
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Anonymous
21st Jul 2018 10:18am
Oh this is so beautifully written! I absolutely love this👌
21st Jul 2018 12:54pm
welcome
firstly (albeit belatedly) to the community
dear poet
as well as
to the humble scribble
welcome also
is the review
kind and generous.
when we try
to just put down how we feel
about something/someone truly beautiful
the beauty reflected i believe
is the subject's
not the delivery's
appreciation
of the visit
the review
immense
firstly (albeit belatedly) to the community
dear poet
as well as
to the humble scribble
welcome also
is the review
kind and generous.
when we try
to just put down how we feel
about something/someone truly beautiful
the beauty reflected i believe
is the subject's
not the delivery's
appreciation
of the visit
the review
immense
Anonymous
21st Jul 2018 2:04pm
Lovely sentiments!
21st Jul 2018 2:07pm
Anonymous
- Edited 26th Oct 2020 5:45am
21st Jul 2018 11:16am
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21st Jul 2018 12:57pm
welcome
dear poet
firstly to the community
as well as
to the humble scribble
honored and humbled
by the visit
the review
and the listing
appreciate all
immensely
dear poet
firstly to the community
as well as
to the humble scribble
honored and humbled
by the visit
the review
and the listing
appreciate all
immensely
21st Jul 2018 12:52pm
Wonderful write sweet poet ... I so love flowers ... they bring me such joy ... thanks for reminding me ...
21st Jul 2018 1:00pm
awwe! now that
is kind!
welcome
once again
is the poet admired
as well as the review kind and sweet!
no surprises there
your love for flowers
i believe some of your poems
reflect that
'course they bring nothing
but joy
those flowers
and sometimes
some are lucky
just like this cold soul
to have Friends
who do nothing but same
as the flowers!
is kind!
welcome
once again
is the poet admired
as well as the review kind and sweet!
no surprises there
your love for flowers
i believe some of your poems
reflect that
'course they bring nothing
but joy
those flowers
and sometimes
some are lucky
just like this cold soul
to have Friends
who do nothing but same
as the flowers!
Anonymous
- Edited 22nd Feb 2020 11:45am
21st Jul 2018 5:42pm
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21st Jul 2018 11:47pm
Flowers, summon a fragrance within the heart, way beyond the triggering of surface level senses of sight & smell !
Such a lovely write... 😎🎈🌞🌹🌻
Such a lovely write... 😎🎈🌞🌹🌻
Anonymous
- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
22nd Jul 2018 2:44pm
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