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Unscripted Creativeness
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Wanna lay with you always,
letting our mouths talk
throughout the night
Wanna strip down
to nothing first;
My talkative thoughts to
become as open as yours
when my wishlist finds
unscripted creativeness
when most revealing.
Wanna lay with you always,
letting our mouths talk
throughout the night
Wanna strip down
to nothing first;
My talkative thoughts to
become as open as yours
when my wishlist finds
unscripted creativeness
when most revealing.
Published 21st Jul 2018
Author's Note
The best evenings are those found to be unscripted
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Anonymous
21st Jul 2018 6:30am
I agree. The simplicity of just being, as you’ve described in your poem, is priceless...it’s the fertile time when the most incredible memories are made. Beautiful write!
21st Jul 2018 7:52am
When with that someone that makes you feel most comfortable to just be yourself is priceless
Often just being ourselves with another gets lost in translation
Often just being ourselves with another gets lost in translation
Anonymous
21st Jul 2018 2:30pm
Such a lovely write sweetest🌹!🤗🤗🤗
21st Jul 2018 6:01pm
Anonymous
21st Jul 2018 6:02pm
🌹🤗🌹🤗🌹🤗🌹
21st Jul 2018 6:04pm
