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Word Trap
Sometimes I feel
like I have nothing to say
Maybe it is because
deep down
I believe
that words are meaningless
that my actions
should speak
for themselves
The rest is just chatter
to keep myself and others
entertained
to get my ego stroked
You read this and say:
"How humble and honest she is!"
See!...that's what I mean....
I can't get away from it
like I have nothing to say
Maybe it is because
deep down
I believe
that words are meaningless
that my actions
should speak
for themselves
The rest is just chatter
to keep myself and others
entertained
to get my ego stroked
You read this and say:
"How humble and honest she is!"
See!...that's what I mean....
I can't get away from it
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Re. Word Trap
17th Jul 2018 5:33pm
lol a wry observation dearest Angel
this is how we connect with one another isn't it
by reading each other's poems and commenting...
if I were better at life I would be here less maybe
but I'm a writer words are how I communicate my feelings...
either way i'm happy you're here...
love Brenda
this is how we connect with one another isn't it
by reading each other's poems and commenting...
if I were better at life I would be here less maybe
but I'm a writer words are how I communicate my feelings...
either way i'm happy you're here...
love Brenda
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17th Jul 2018 5:41pm
Yeah, of course that's why we are here sharing poetry....
I wasn't really judging it, just remarking because it is remarkable.
Thanks for your words
A.
I wasn't really judging it, just remarking because it is remarkable.
Thanks for your words
A.
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17th Jul 2018 6:00pm
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17th Jul 2018 7:02pm
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17th Jul 2018 6:19pm
Oh you wicked girl... gotta giggle... It has been proved
that stroking is good for you... the strokee... and for the stroker too.
Like when you stroke the poosygata... lowers your Blood Pressure...
and hers too... makes you all SOoooo re-la-x-ed.
Love the poem... Makes a pretty picture on the page, too. hugs, Ely
that stroking is good for you... the strokee... and for the stroker too.
Like when you stroke the poosygata... lowers your Blood Pressure...
and hers too... makes you all SOoooo re-la-x-ed.
Love the poem... Makes a pretty picture on the page, too. hugs, Ely
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17th Jul 2018 7:01pm
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17th Jul 2018 9:48pm
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17th Jul 2018 9:24pm
"To-morrow, and to-morrow, and to-morrow,
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day
To the last syllable of recorded time,
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage
And then is heard no more: it is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing"
yet despite this Shakespeare kept writing...'all the world's a stage'
Creeps in this petty pace from day to day
To the last syllable of recorded time,
And all our yesterdays have lighted fools
The way to dusty death. Out, out, brief candle!
Life's but a walking shadow, a poor player
That struts and frets his hour upon the stage
And then is heard no more: it is a tale
Told by an idiot, full of sound and fury,
Signifying nothing"
yet despite this Shakespeare kept writing...'all the world's a stage'
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17th Jul 2018 9:49pm
Wow, you went all out on that one....or Shakespere did...thank you for your reply.
A.
A.
Re. Word Trap
18th Jul 2018 8:42am
I love this bare-boned piece of introspective ink Angel...and actions always say more than words.
Cheers...Harry
Cheers...Harry
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18th Jul 2018 5:04pm
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
20th Jul 2018 1:31am
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