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Euphoric Bliss (Limerick String)
Words dripping from the tip of your tongue
I roll along with each little one
all tied up and teased
poetically pleased
my debriefing has just now begun
Oh I long for the taste of your kiss
and true romance that won't go amiss
two lovers by night
each morsel we bite
engulfing us in euphoric bliss
The resound our of moans softly scream
it is finally much more than a dream
free flowing of trust
a night of pure lust
licking up of our fill of the cream
I roll along with each little one
all tied up and teased
poetically pleased
my debriefing has just now begun
Oh I long for the taste of your kiss
and true romance that won't go amiss
two lovers by night
each morsel we bite
engulfing us in euphoric bliss
The resound our of moans softly scream
it is finally much more than a dream
free flowing of trust
a night of pure lust
licking up of our fill of the cream
Published 15th Jul 2018
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15th Jul 2018 3:38pm
"licking up of our fill of cream" ... great closing line ... nice job again with the rhyme ...
15th Jul 2018 3:39pm
15th Jul 2018 3:43pm
15th Jul 2018 6:53pm
The limerick form adds a nice bounce, I like this a lot.
Is the word order in that last stanza intended? "The resound our of moans softly scream" seems inverted to me.
Is the word order in that last stanza intended? "The resound our of moans softly scream" seems inverted to me.
16th Jul 2018 8:39am
15th Jul 2018 11:14pm
16th Jul 2018 8:39am
Thanks Pandora...just passing the time with fun and fantasy...two of my favorite things
16th Jul 2018 7:03pm
16th Jul 2018 1:41am
16th Jul 2018 8:40am
Anonymous
26th Jul 2018 2:26pm
Light and airy, that's the feeling I take away from this one. A lovely breath of fresh air. :-)
...Willow
...Willow
26th Jul 2018 2:46pm
