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Images Of Saturn
Sitting at ten pence shaped tables
bodies in infra red
all around me
I peer through fenetres
paved in glass
out into the blustery skies
I watch a rainbow smoulder
through the summer air
prismatic is the holder
of the golden sunshine yesteryear
solar picks a colour
of her auburn cola hair
Images of saturn
arise to my eyes
god how I wish
I was back there .
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Published 23rd Dec 2009
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Anonymous
24th Dec 2009 6:18am
A rich and heavenly mix of self-reflection and high rhetoric. Lovely short poem. Especially love the phrase "cola hair".
24th Dec 2009 6:39am
Thanks Jack , Iam really pleased you liked my poem and your summary of it was (like your writings) impeccable .Again thanks and good luck in the onset of a new poetic annual beginning ..... Paul
26th Dec 2009 1:25am
WOW!! Your imagery is superb. So simplistic and vividly impactful. Favorite image: a rainbow smoulder. Absolutely loved it.
28th Dec 2009 3:32am
Anonymous
17th Oct 2012 10:45pm
Nice!!! Really enjoyed your images of color you painted. :)
18th Oct 2012 00:11am
