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Wonder
sometimes I wonder
is it real?
everything I think
or feel
sometimes it seems
like a mist
evaporating
with a kiss
of realizing
deep within
all is one
awake, sleeping
in between
above, below
moving fast
or going slow...
most of everything
is space
in molecules
electrons race
through the emptiness
I feel
wondering whether
it is real
is it real?
everything I think
or feel
sometimes it seems
like a mist
evaporating
with a kiss
of realizing
deep within
all is one
awake, sleeping
in between
above, below
moving fast
or going slow...
most of everything
is space
in molecules
electrons race
through the emptiness
I feel
wondering whether
it is real
Published 9th Jul 2018
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9th Jul 2018 6:34pm
Oh Lawrence ... this one is flawless ... really spoke to me ... resonates with me ... captures a lot of what I have been thinking and feeling lately ... bravo my sweet poet ...
9th Jul 2018 6:48pm
10th Jul 2018 00:29am
Very nice flow, as the form of your poem...also what you speak about...so it seems to be real in the fleeting moment...flow is what is real....maybe?
10th Jul 2018 1:36am
happy you flowed along with this...(did it rain?)...thanks so much for writing.....
Lawrence
Lawrence
10th Jul 2018 1:56am
Not yet, but there are some thunderstorm clouds building up. Maybe tonight...
A.
A.
10th Jul 2018 00:48am
I'm getting the shroom feels from this poem, hehe. Nicely written, as usual.
10th Jul 2018 1:27am
10th Jul 2018 8:10am
dearest Lawrence, I often wonder the same thing
I sometimes think we are beings who have no real knowledge of our true origins
while others walk among us fully aware...
beautiful thinking here..
love Brenda
I sometimes think we are beings who have no real knowledge of our true origins
while others walk among us fully aware...
beautiful thinking here..
love Brenda
10th Jul 2018 3:36pm
Thanks Brenda...I've had far too many altered states of consciousness to take anything at face value...always the only certainty is my consciousness ....all the other beings are maybe's...
Anonymous
15th Jul 2018 11:25pm
This resonates very closely with me and the million questions I’ve thrown at life of late.
Just perfect Lawrence.
Just perfect Lawrence.
15th Jul 2018 11:28pm
