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•Lil' One•
You were so tiny in my arms,
Lookin up into my eyes,
I didn't even realize.
Not once or twice but three times would be the last I'd see..
Your sweet baby blues
Lookin back at me.
Lil' fingers around my class ring,
Like you always do.
How could I ever think it would end n be thru.
No more late nite cuddles, or smiles.
No more workout lil' kicks n giggles,
No more lil' cries or wiggles.
The only thing I have was that you were held in your last moments with me.
A Question still unanswered of how it came to be.
And how you'd look and be with your amazin personality.
Your hair a dark fine brown,
Your skin pale as snow.
I can only imagine now.. of how you'd grow.
Lookin up into my eyes,
I didn't even realize.
Not once or twice but three times would be the last I'd see..
Your sweet baby blues
Lookin back at me.
Lil' fingers around my class ring,
Like you always do.
How could I ever think it would end n be thru.
No more late nite cuddles, or smiles.
No more workout lil' kicks n giggles,
No more lil' cries or wiggles.
The only thing I have was that you were held in your last moments with me.
A Question still unanswered of how it came to be.
And how you'd look and be with your amazin personality.
Your hair a dark fine brown,
Your skin pale as snow.
I can only imagine now.. of how you'd grow.
Published 8th Jul 2018
Author's Note
Unanswered question I have til this day, That I won't ever know while I'm here on this earth you see..but i know you'd want me to continue to luv n live free.. I miss you tremendously. And I am as I promised.. til we meet again my lil wiggle worm.. Mommy misses you.
Written 6.7.2018 dedicated to my lil Leigha.. its been so long since I've written... bout this...
Written 6.7.2018 dedicated to my lil Leigha.. its been so long since I've written... bout this...
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8th Jul 2018 5:15am
I'm sorry for your loss, Diamond. No parent should go through the torment of losing their child. Despite your suffering, you've created a beautiful and heartfelt poem. It's an honor to read it.
8th Jul 2018 5:29am
8th Jul 2018 5:45am
I love you so much, ange..This is an amazing write and I wish I had the composure to write more in response...But even so...corrections must be made...
*Were...not where
*Were...not where
8th Jul 2018 6:02am
Ty luv.. it's one of the many things I absolutely luv bout you! .. that being said... I'm gonna shh... n correct my mistake..
8th Jul 2018 12:00pm
8th Jul 2018 1:58pm
30th Jul 2018 2:57pm
My sincere condolences, Dia.
Though I wish I had read this earlier,
I still felt the need to comment.
Stay strong and keep writing.
Though I wish I had read this earlier,
I still felt the need to comment.
Stay strong and keep writing.
30th Jul 2018 4:19pm
2nd Jul 2020 10:55pm
As a father of four with a miracle fifth on the way this hit me deeply. Losing a child is the worst experience in nature that no one should have to know.
I cannot begin to imagine what it must be like and to be honest I wouldn't want to. Pain is often the driving force behind artistic creation, for the artist is the one who can turn something dark and agonising into something beautiful.
My deepest sympathies to you.
XXX
I cannot begin to imagine what it must be like and to be honest I wouldn't want to. Pain is often the driving force behind artistic creation, for the artist is the one who can turn something dark and agonising into something beautiful.
My deepest sympathies to you.
XXX
