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Arousal
The twilight had descended when I woke;
I sensed his lips were resting in my hair;
His kisses carried me like fiery smoke
To a warm place, when he could strip me bare,
He found I lacked resistance to his need;
And knew, already, my turf was not dry;
Aware of dampness, he would plant his seed,
Once he had thrust in deeply to supply
The presence I desired, without speaking;
Or any hint of wishes to be met:
A want to feel him fucking - not a weakling -
But potent, masculine and keen to get
His satisfaction, through our slow carousal,
Once he woke me, assured of my arousal.
I sensed his lips were resting in my hair;
His kisses carried me like fiery smoke
To a warm place, when he could strip me bare,
He found I lacked resistance to his need;
And knew, already, my turf was not dry;
Aware of dampness, he would plant his seed,
Once he had thrust in deeply to supply
The presence I desired, without speaking;
Or any hint of wishes to be met:
A want to feel him fucking - not a weakling -
But potent, masculine and keen to get
His satisfaction, through our slow carousal,
Once he woke me, assured of my arousal.
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Re. Arousal
Anonymous
3rd Jul 2018 11:51am
Always hitting the spot dear Sweet Oblivion. I always enjoy your ink. So full of powerful eros, yet so pudique. It is a celebration of all that is pleasure and (I dare use a neologism) sensually correct. I love dreaming. It is in the mind that pleasure starts. You are very good at creating visuality. Here, the words and the structure work, as usual, very well. Excellent. J.
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Je suis pleine de discrétion et de réserve aussi monsieur, mais il faut être sensuelle á la même fois.
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2018 2:11pm
È esattamente ciò che intendevo signora. Capisco la sua discrezionalità, pur capendo che tocca punti scottanti. Capisco il francese. L'ho studiato 5 anni. Ma non ho sufficiente padronanza per rispondere. Se invece conosce l'italiano, sarò lieta di intrattenermi in tale lingua. La ringrazio. :)
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Puoi intrattenermi in qualsiasi lingua vostro scelga, signore; Sono contenta che vediamo cose da prospettive é comprensione simili. (Era la vostra parola "pudique" che mi ha portato a rispondere in francese).
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2018 9:58pm
Con vero piacere.
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3rd Jul 2018 10:13pm
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Anonymous
3rd Jul 2018 11:56pm
Grazie mia signora. Le assicuro altrettanto. Sono servo vostro. A presto.
Giovenale
Giovenale
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3rd Jul 2018 1:27pm
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3rd Jul 2018 1:32pm
Thank you for sharing your enjoyment. I like to explore different words in different scenarios.
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3rd Jul 2018 2:23pm
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3rd Jul 2018 6:09pm
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3rd Jul 2018 9:38pm
I love the slow build, so well rhymed and structured. Then that last line surprises. Her man's in for an ecstatic start to the day. Wonderful write, worthy of the RL, and beyond.
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