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Venom
Cast in a pit of vipers
she became immune
to their so deadly venom
she became immune
to their so deadly venom
Published 28th Jun 2018
Author's Note
Stopping by for a quicky....still feeling the darkness
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28th Jun 2018 7:39pm
28th Jun 2018 10:34pm
28th Jun 2018 9:22pm
28th Jun 2018 10:34pm
I see brevity as a sign
that you have distilled
the very essence of the thought.
Well done. Ely
that you have distilled
the very essence of the thought.
Well done. Ely
29th Jun 2018 2:50am
Your comment almost makes a good haiku by itself....some streamlining of the sylables and...haiku
Thanx Ely
Thanx Ely
29th Jun 2018 4:19am
You're right...alittle artistic whittling might be just the thing. Gracias,hijita, Ely
29th Jun 2018 3:42am
29th Jun 2018 3:34pm
