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S P I C E 🌶
1
The moon phase is right
tonight—
The astrological signs
are aligned
in sensual position,
most favored,
to create
delicious possibilities.
2
This is when I arrange
to summon you.
To order
Mandarin takeout
favorite dishes
brought to me by you,
most deserving lover—
hot chili pepper!
3
Year of the Ox, horn’ed,
strong,
single-minded,
and purposefully so
when comes to
deft technique
when serving a Tiger
of her Year, your Queen.
The moon phase is right
tonight—
The astrological signs
are aligned
in sensual position,
most favored,
to create
delicious possibilities.
2
This is when I arrange
to summon you.
To order
Mandarin takeout
favorite dishes
brought to me by you,
most deserving lover—
hot chili pepper!
3
Year of the Ox, horn’ed,
strong,
single-minded,
and purposefully so
when comes to
deft technique
when serving a Tiger
of her Year, your Queen.
Author's Note
Free verse poetic form that’s been flowing from me all day.
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- Edited 30th Jul 2018 7:47am
27th Jun 2018 8:53am
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27th Jun 2018 10:58am
*chuckles*
Then here you go, some moogoogipan with steamed rice. A pair of red lacquered chopsticks... can I temp you? 🍲🥢
Then here you go, some moogoogipan with steamed rice. A pair of red lacquered chopsticks... can I temp you? 🍲🥢
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27th Jun 2018 2:48pm
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*nods her head low and smiles mischievously...*
Spice is the... spice of life! 🌶🐾
Thank you, bc poet sir.
Spice is the... spice of life! 🌶🐾
Thank you, bc poet sir.
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Oh it just might, Tim my friend... however
there's no insurance coverage around here if someone gets injured! *laughs*
Thanks so much for your visit. 🌶🐾
there's no insurance coverage around here if someone gets injured! *laughs*
Thanks so much for your visit. 🌶🐾
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27th Jun 2018 9:34pm
Wish I could write free verse like this. I love the astrological references, and your introduction of the Year of the Ox. Can't wait for the Year of the Crow, but I won't hold my breath. Fine job, Jade!
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27th Jun 2018 9:48pm
Thanks so very much, dearest crowfly friend!
I've written free verse for almost as long as I've been a poet (which includes the very first poem I ever wrote). I've always found it to be a most pleasant form for the way I'm wired.
I hope all's been well, and that we'll talk again soon. 🌶🐾
I've written free verse for almost as long as I've been a poet (which includes the very first poem I ever wrote). I've always found it to be a most pleasant form for the way I'm wired.
I hope all's been well, and that we'll talk again soon. 🌶🐾
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Um, spicy Chinese take out, year of the tiger (queen) hot...
How do I love thee, let me count the bowls ...
🍜🍲🍚
tommycat
(p.s. congrats miss 107!)
How do I love thee, let me count the bowls ...
🍜🍲🍚
tommycat
(p.s. congrats miss 107!)
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28th Jun 2018 2:27pm
Mmm, thank you, my tommycat; for the tasty offerings, the playful indulgence, and for another honor of place...
Oh... and Miss 106 was a mere glance (blink and you missed her) that slipped right through the paparazzi...
🎥 📷 📱 💃🏻
Oh... and Miss 106 was a mere glance (blink and you missed her) that slipped right through the paparazzi...
🎥 📷 📱 💃🏻
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2nd Jul 2018 8:20pm
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2nd Jul 2018 9:01pm
Why thank you, Nari, I love this form and there’s more to writing it than many poets think.
And warm greets & welcome to you, new member to the Deep.
🐯I’m Jade🐾
And warm greets & welcome to you, new member to the Deep.
🐯I’m Jade🐾
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