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Mahalo
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My dear sister,
You were so excited
even giddy
( I can only imagine )
at the prospect of
taking wing with a lover
your love,
to a tropical paradise
contemplating what,
I can only imagine.
2
My dear sister,
I’ve been to the summit
of a diamond’s head
with wind in my hair,
my love
and a lover,
as he lifted me
from my bed
and into his eyes
of a full happiness.
My dear sister,
You were so excited
even giddy
( I can only imagine )
at the prospect of
taking wing with a lover
your love,
to a tropical paradise
contemplating what,
I can only imagine.
2
My dear sister,
I’ve been to the summit
of a diamond’s head
with wind in my hair,
my love
and a lover,
as he lifted me
from my bed
and into his eyes
of a full happiness.
Published 26th Jun 2018
Author's Note
Author’s comment:
Not being there doesn’t mean you weren’t there.
ma·ha·lo
ˈmäˌhälō
A Hawaiian word to express gratitude.
Not being there doesn’t mean you weren’t there.
ma·ha·lo
ˈmäˌhälō
A Hawaiian word to express gratitude.
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26th Jun 2018 8:15pm
26th Jun 2018 9:51pm
Thank you, and yes... the morning has brought us so much, my Tomcat, of many shades of colors & sensations.
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I like how you address your sister initially then give it the personal touch with your own lover. I've never been to Hawaii, but this might be the next best thing. Really enjoyed this! Mahalo, and thank you!
Thank you so much, my dear crowfly friend. Yes, today I’ve been very much inspired to express in the true free form poetic verse style that I used to do almost exclusively, long with Japanese short form poetry; both styles I was best known for long before I was invited to come to DUP. I’m pleased you enjoyed this piece. I’m about to publish another using free form. It feels good to have it come back Just like it used to be.
Jadey🌺
Jadey🌺
