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Tunnel Vision
In a forest during dusk
An intensely bright light had struck
Over a large lake where drinking animals had fled
Than it abruptly disappeared; had I imagined it all in my head?
From my position on top of a cliff overlooking the lake
I pulled out my binoculars, and I didn’t know what to make
Of what I saw; it was strange
A group of figures in the middle of an exchange
Yet one group was shorter than I’d have envisioned
As if my line of sight was through tunnel vision
I adjusted my binoculars, and what I saw blew me away
Strange, humanoid creatures with skin the color of grey
Heads larger than their bodies, and big eyes as black as the night
Just looking at them had me trembling in fright
Why was a group of humans dealing with them?
If it had to be done in secrecy, then surely, it’s to be condemned
Yet when I crawled out to get a better view from among the trees
A black helicopter suddenly appeared on top of me…
One day, I received an envelope in my mailbox
It read: “Keep quiet, or you’ll get bashed with rocks.”
An intensely bright light had struck
Over a large lake where drinking animals had fled
Than it abruptly disappeared; had I imagined it all in my head?
From my position on top of a cliff overlooking the lake
I pulled out my binoculars, and I didn’t know what to make
Of what I saw; it was strange
A group of figures in the middle of an exchange
Yet one group was shorter than I’d have envisioned
As if my line of sight was through tunnel vision
I adjusted my binoculars, and what I saw blew me away
Strange, humanoid creatures with skin the color of grey
Heads larger than their bodies, and big eyes as black as the night
Just looking at them had me trembling in fright
Why was a group of humans dealing with them?
If it had to be done in secrecy, then surely, it’s to be condemned
Yet when I crawled out to get a better view from among the trees
A black helicopter suddenly appeared on top of me…
One day, I received an envelope in my mailbox
It read: “Keep quiet, or you’ll get bashed with rocks.”
Written by
LunasChild8
Published 26th Jun 2018
Author's Note
Written for the "THROUGH THE BINOCULARS" competition.
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Re. Tunnel Vision
26th Jun 2018 8:03pm
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26th Jun 2018 8:10pm
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Anonymous
28th Jun 2018 00:51am
This is AWESOME!!
And that ending....PERFECT!!
Good luck in the comp.
Got my vote!!
And that ending....PERFECT!!
Good luck in the comp.
Got my vote!!
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Re. Tunnel Vision
28th Jun 2018 9:41am
“If it has to be done in secrecy, the surely, it’s to be condemned”
That is the truth.
That is the truth.
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28th Jun 2018 3:15pm
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29th Jun 2018 4:40am
again wonderful lands to explore - I like the darkness and menace of this one - could feel the tension :-))))))
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29th Jun 2018 4:41am
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30th Jun 2018 4:52am
this is a scenario I have heard a little about and there are much info they don't want known do you think of the little people or know of them
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30th Jun 2018 9:40pm
I've heard several conspiracy theories, but it's hard to judge which ones are actually true. I do believe in aliens; after all, it'd be a shame and arrogant to think that we're the only lifeforms in the vast universe.
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1st Jul 2018 3:45am
I always thought the same way...I would rather think so..then think not because when you think not you have quit thinking whether they are or not I will be watching thanks
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2nd Jul 2018 3:14pm
Just recently, the results of research done by Oxford university have concluded that no alien life exists in the universe. That is extremely arrogant, and it makes me wonder if perhaps this was done to turn our attentions away from this matter.
What do you think?
What do you think?
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beautiful Luna wonderful storyline here
and I most definitely believe there are other life forces out there
I believe they communicate in and through us
perhaps without us even knowing it...
great inking..
love Crim
and I most definitely believe there are other life forces out there
I believe they communicate in and through us
perhaps without us even knowing it...
great inking..
love Crim
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2nd Jul 2018 3:57pm
I hold a big value in trying to listen to my higher consciousness or my ESP buddy then we are born with the blank slate
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14th Aug 2023 6:44pm
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOH That is excellent. Good luck in the comp............ I already see first prize for you. Regards, Robert.
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15th Aug 2023 2:29am