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Somber
There is an infinite scale
Of wretchedness;
Yet within an unforgiving,
Undeniable beauty
In it All.
Of wretchedness;
Yet within an unforgiving,
Undeniable beauty
In it All.
Published 25th Jun 2018
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25th Jun 2018 3:47am
Like the message and the shortness of this piece.
The "In it all" could be left out in my opinion. It's more round without it....but that's just me...
The "In it all" could be left out in my opinion. It's more round without it....but that's just me...
25th Jun 2018 5:04am
